Mary Met Greg. pt. 1 of 3

[Borat]

There was mary, she met greg,
20 years old, a-top her shoulder's packed a hard head,
at first she stood back, didn't care to hear him talk,
he said he'd pull her push aways till they both met sparks,

They started small, gave a hug tossed a hand just to stay involved,
evolved conversation, till she bore it all,
soon she let him in, expected more than just friends,
told everyone around it was her and him, they were a couple.

a couple years pass and mary marries greg, despite her family
and everything they once said, say's she believes in him,
could care less of what they see in him.

see she's been waiting, thanks god for all her patients,
she's been sick for years and could use the medication,
she left her parent's place-in search for better placement
a place to live three bedrooms a furnished basement,
she wants her kids to grow up to know what love really does,
but greg was on a different kick just consumed in drugs...


verse 1 haha

[Borat]

does anyone leave feed anymore?

[Borat]

great answer.

[Haz]

lol

Nice Lil Way To Jus End da Verse..
And Make Me wonder Wdf is Gunna happen Wid these People..
Anyways... Liked How you Piece It Up To Be a Story..
Have More Rhymes in This shit Though.. No Flaws i Could See Really
Liked The Story Line..
Keep It Up...

[Borat]

THANK YOU FOR THE FEED... I was thinking about putting more rhymes into it, but it really goes so amazing to the instromental i have for it, I will probably put an audio up after its all said and done. so watch for it.

[precise]

nice shit man, uve always been pretty sick with a story line, ur all about the topical pieces and poetry, good job, lookin forward to part 2 n 3 dude

[Borat]

Thanks for the feed, I will drop some more rhymes in part two and three.