Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2008 3:31 am
I AM....the best n the truest-u-see, cuz my flow influencing-thee,
Flesh.. aint another as fluid-as-he, the liquid flows oh so lucratively
(I like that, its pretty smooth)
And he's someone you-couldn't-be, leave ya whole crew-in-defeat
its why he gotta be the cruelest-emcee, to drop heat n ruin-the-beats
And come through-with-the-heat, on a drop top cruisin-the-streets
(more smoothness)
To me, sayin-some-words is like sprayin-the-third, slayin-you-birds,
Aint nobody see you 'messin with shit' unless you playin-with-turd
(coughs)
Pronunciation-disturbed to make it prove a demonstration-to-herbs...
Continuation-my-verbs is like an allegorical representation-ya-heard?
(Good vocabulary and makes sense)
So try to understand-the-definition, niggas cant stand-the-demolition
I mean someone's gotta do it and I'm the man to handle-the-position...
(smooth)
Its amber-that-im-dishin, u cudnt bring fire with a candle-in-the-kitchen,
Like tryin to command-a-politician, i leave no chance-for-the-opposition
(that could have ended with a better punchline)
Tryna be the illest like cancer-is-the-mission, n so i answer-indecisions
So high its like im dancin-wit-the-pigeons, ill slice ya mask-into-divisions
(Good rhyming, but I don't like the content)
Poor fuck, u cant afford a check so im sendin pampers-to-ya-children!
Got u niggas screamin "oh my God!" like im the fuckin answer-to-religion..
(Best punchline of the verse)
its like a curse-laid to burst-flames, first to have ya hearse-made
ill fuck u over more than the Vietnamese havin the "shirts-made"
(nah)
cuz the fo-fifth got u "dodgin the block" more than a "reverse-lay"
i dont spit it or talk it bitch i squirt-game, so when the verse-made,
That first punchline could have been really sick, I'd reuse it by actually saying reverse lay up)
i already got the broad on her knees like she ready to "church-pray"
so im leavin her skirt-slain, and likely to give you a red shirt-stain
(filler)
if u talk bout "ill" then im the worst-case, ill have the third-blaze
killin roaches like i dispersed-raid while u screamin "it hurts-mayne"
(ah)
FLESH WOUND...the real reason paramedics is grabbin the first-aid...
(ok)
Overall, obviously a very solid verse. I decided to break it all down so you can see what I personally like and didn't.
8.6/10
Flesh.. aint another as fluid-as-he, the liquid flows oh so lucratively
(I like that, its pretty smooth)
And he's someone you-couldn't-be, leave ya whole crew-in-defeat
its why he gotta be the cruelest-emcee, to drop heat n ruin-the-beats
And come through-with-the-heat, on a drop top cruisin-the-streets
(more smoothness)
To me, sayin-some-words is like sprayin-the-third, slayin-you-birds,
Aint nobody see you 'messin with shit' unless you playin-with-turd
(coughs)
Pronunciation-disturbed to make it prove a demonstration-to-herbs...
Continuation-my-verbs is like an allegorical representation-ya-heard?
(Good vocabulary and makes sense)
So try to understand-the-definition, niggas cant stand-the-demolition
I mean someone's gotta do it and I'm the man to handle-the-position...
(smooth)
Its amber-that-im-dishin, u cudnt bring fire with a candle-in-the-kitchen,
Like tryin to command-a-politician, i leave no chance-for-the-opposition
(that could have ended with a better punchline)
Tryna be the illest like cancer-is-the-mission, n so i answer-indecisions
So high its like im dancin-wit-the-pigeons, ill slice ya mask-into-divisions
(Good rhyming, but I don't like the content)
Poor fuck, u cant afford a check so im sendin pampers-to-ya-children!
Got u niggas screamin "oh my God!" like im the fuckin answer-to-religion..
(Best punchline of the verse)
its like a curse-laid to burst-flames, first to have ya hearse-made
ill fuck u over more than the Vietnamese havin the "shirts-made"
(nah)
cuz the fo-fifth got u "dodgin the block" more than a "reverse-lay"
i dont spit it or talk it bitch i squirt-game, so when the verse-made,
That first punchline could have been really sick, I'd reuse it by actually saying reverse lay up)
i already got the broad on her knees like she ready to "church-pray"
so im leavin her skirt-slain, and likely to give you a red shirt-stain
(filler)
if u talk bout "ill" then im the worst-case, ill have the third-blaze
killin roaches like i dispersed-raid while u screamin "it hurts-mayne"
(ah)
FLESH WOUND...the real reason paramedics is grabbin the first-aid...
(ok)
Overall, obviously a very solid verse. I decided to break it all down so you can see what I personally like and didn't.
8.6/10