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ScottJames
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Post by ScottJames »

preciate the feedback yo!!
thanks for breakin it down...
though i disagree with some of your opinions ;)
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ScottJames wrote:preciate the feedback yo!!
thanks for breakin it down...
though i disagree with some of your opinions ;)
Of course you do its your drop. That's why you get others feedback. lol
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Post by JHaze »

shit is tight bro, the multies are good wit some nice puunches here n there, flowed pretty good too, everyoneelse pretty much highlighted the best lines, but yea the peice is tight man, only suggestion i have is rearrangin the way u type ur bars so its a lil easier to read but its still dope
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