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False Perception ft. Arv, Complex, Ekoms

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Post by TreTru »

that's trippy...I'm sure it would be a hott track.Juss wonderin what the
tempo on the beat would be...
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Post by Jesodist »

I agree with tru this would really be sick if you all recorded it on audio.
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Post by Arvincible »

u guys are funny, uppin for more feed
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Post by Cee4 »

Arv - solid verse. The multis were there as expected. It was good solid verse. U did well up against Plex and Ekoms coz this is probably their best style of writing. 7/10

Murderous vendetta-shit, killin for routinely-habits, never any apologies when i mean-to-stab-it
the red beam gleamin-rapid when i squeeze-n-grab it cuz i "stay strapped" like Houdini-Jackets!
^^^
Im undecided about the gun talk but this was a Dope punch.



Ekoms - probably the best verse ive read from u in a while. The flow and multis were flawless. Probably had the best of the multis. 8/10

medically my curse-is-ancient reversed-n-raisin the dead from the dirt-their-graves-in, preserved-invasions,
got these bodies burstin-pavements, but i got em' purged-in-basements, cuz i'm keepin it UNDERGROUND till this Earth-awakens,
i'm only hidden~..still~why~first-is-vacant, cuz i stay spittin~till~my~nerves-r-shaken, i'm a LIVING HELL like the BIRTH-OF-SATAN,
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Dope



Plex - Again the flow and multis were excellent. Your verse seemed a little more personal though which added a little something to the collab. 8/10

always coming more ill-than-expected, I'm WIRED-with-adrenaline
until I'm TIRED-of-the-PEN-again, and I decide to retire-at-Decembers-End, I'll come with FIRE-like-an-emblem
^^^
So your retiring as well now? Lol


Overall a good collab. All 3 verses went well together.
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Post by Arvincible »

lol u wanna know something? i wrote this a month ago as my last piece, but i didnt have the last bar till recently and gave it to koms, then he went off of mine, and so did plex, i wish i couldve done a much better job because i shouldve expect their verses to be so great.

anyways thanks for the feed
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Post by complexity »

Probably not C4, that was just a reference to everyone retiring.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Most probably one of the SICKEST collabs on illest.
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Post by thaphantom »

Dope shit. not giving you a full break down because it was ill. it was already stated anyway. arve you've improved alot man. plex u still got it. and ekoms u still got it.
Never let life live you, You always live life.
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needs more feed from the active heads...

uppin
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Post by RainMan »

i made this account just to show some luv for what u guys spit

Some ill shit u got there

i aint much of a rapper or lyricist (im trying)

But now im taking notes.

*Also sorry for bumpin this , i just had to post a comment*
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