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-.HaZarD.- wrote:fuck you haz go ride some homo bandwagon you're always on and make sure you have the first copy of buddens padded room. because thats all you fucking talk about you faggot.


And .. All U Talk About is ' Knucklebabies Or Calm Your Beard' Homo Ass Termanology.. I'm Not Goin Back N Forth With Your Pathetic Ass.. We'll Have a A Rematch.. N I Want A Battle In Da Text Grounds ..
dude.... THIS IS HOW U FUCKING QUOTE!!!!!!! dick ridin faggot... i can't wait till i advance into the Tourney so i can show ur fuckin pathetic excuse for a person ass up... get ready bitch cause its comin... thats all i'ma say...
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oh and... btw... this diss was horrible...
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Blah Blah Blah ... Go Cheerlead In Some Other Thread Fat ass
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okay and u go dick ryde somebody else... arab...
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Post by Cee4 »

actually the punches were OK here. dickriders on both sides lol
anyway im not a huge fan of the stretched bars especially for a scripture diss. yeah i use stretched bars in battles but thats only so i can make room for more multis, wordplay and punches in order to get the cats coz i know people will literally count multis n shit when they vote.


like i said the verse was OK. not your best but not as bad as people making out.
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Exactly ..
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Post by The Gonz »

Like I said, there were punches present, some good ones too, but they are buried beneath all that filler. Write for audio, not for text battles. Nobody outside of this site gives a fuck about your text battling skills. They wanna hear you flow. And with that structure you used for this, it will honestly sound like garbage. If you disagree, don't bitch, prove my wrong by recording it.
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lol @ this nonsense..wat crowd do i go with? these faggots forget that i was here wayyyy before AME was even born..back when this used to be called freestyle box..of course ur sorry ass only came in during the time that kurse arrived, u were cocky from the start and u'll die cocky with a dick in ur ass from riding so much
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And You Aint Gettin No Where ..

LoL Your Not Even Relevent... How Come We Dont See Elevation From You?...
This Is Random But It's The TRUTH!...

Ay .. If You As Nice As Niggaz Make U Out To Be ... Try Me ... Shit Let's Get Anotha Battle , Cause U Dont Want It In The Scripts Or Audio...
Still Got Nigga'z I've Been Lettin Chill Out so I Can Snipe Um..
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

im relevant to the fact that im always brought up due to crew matters, i'd love to battle again, right now i'm borrowing a laptop since my computer's fucked up, audio wise i still need equipment, just recently moved so it'll be a while before i get active on illest again, till then u'll just have to occupy urself, as far as me elevating, i been too busy to write and when i do get the chance its for shit n giggles, battled way too much to take text seriously, but audio's a different story
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lmao . Shutup
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