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ohhh shyt.....some dope scripts..

opener-Jay
multies-Tef..had more exact rhymes jay had more slant rhymes
punches-Jay more direct and more damaging
personals-Jay
creativity-Jay
flow-Tef closer to audio style IMO..Jays bars are hella stretched so it's harder to figure his flow out
enjoyment-both
closer-Tef..Jay's concept was pretty dope but that tough lawn wordplay was a stretch..IMO

its Jay 5 and Tef 4 .....buuuut..
Jay skipped line 4 IMO thats worse than having filler..so i'll have to take a point away from Jay on my vote..so.........
Vote=Tie.. that's 3-1 ..uppin

you cant give each battler a vote..

lol

still 2-0 for jay

hm..tre if u can decide on who to vote on that'd be appreciated..there's no tie.. its one or the other..2-0 uppin for some votes

Yea I mean thanks for the vote, but can't vote for both us, more please

alright.. not gonna break this down bar by bar

punchlines:jaygunna (was more direct)
personals:jaygunna(for the nWo line)
flow:jaygunna(better rhymescheme)
rhymescheme:jaygunna(was more consistent and effective)
creativity:jaygunna(for nameplay,metas/similies)
entertainment:teflon (was funnier with lines like Eazy E)

vote:jaygunna

3-0

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