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Teflon vs Magic Mark(Teflon)

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Re: Teflon vs Magic Mark

Post by eMCee Havic »

complexity- teflon
flow- teflon
punches- teflon
enjoyment- magic
punches-teflon
personals-magic

vote- teflon

favorite line from teflon-
"I'm gonna smash this wack trash, no way this whore's better
Fuck being out of his league, he's in the wrong sport all-together!"

favorite line from magic mark-
"never bulletproof, it looks like you devoid sense
common misconception, but teflon NEVER avoids death"

this was pretty close, but over all teflon came off harder, magic"s verse was way to simplistic. overall vote- Teflon
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Re: Teflon vs Magic Mark

Post by Prophet »

Punches: Teflon, idk it seems like Mark dint rlly try, a few punches would've been dope if worded differently, but Teflon had the harder hitting verse.
Flow: Teflon, Marks bars were shorter but Tef has like an audio type flow, which won this category for me.
Personals: Mark, Tef never uses personals and Mark mentions either a personals or nameplay in every bar, so he wins this cat ez.
Multies: Teflon, didn't see that many from Mark
Wordplay: Mark, the NO W line was pretty dope.

Vote: Teflon, imo had the better overall verse.
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Re: Teflon vs Magic Mark

Post by MagicMark »

aight 4 - 1

nice win,good job tef..

explanation -

lol, where i've been, and where i started, any verse that isn't personal to your opponent is basically discarded from the start.. so i guess i kinda had that in my head, as its usually put down to 'nice / okay bar but too indirect, could be used on anyone', which puts the verse way down.

so i didnt think i had to do too much, also, this was very rushed, but i thought it was still sound enough, also made the mistake about him being no showed,

and i couldn't really be bothered doing the 'illest' style battle, with overdrawn multis and bad similies.

so i apologise for not putting together a decent verse

again, nice verse tef.
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Re: Teflon vs Magic Mark

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Thanks you too...update and close please
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Re: Teflon vs Magic Mark

Post by t_tyme »

well teflon was alright got to work on flow but i think magic mark won
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Re: Teflon vs Magic Mark

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Lol ok man ^^^ thanks for the input work on my flow please my flow is the best thing I got going.
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Re: Teflon vs Magic Mark

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

hm?watever that was.. closing this up since it seems like its come down to a decision/agreement

-closed n updated-
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