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Cee4
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Re: Swagger Like M

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damn your getting pounded Mutual!

lol at Ghosts rant
i aint heard his audio in ages but he must of improved a million per cent to be puting someone down like that

first off mutual the lyrics suck, dont make sense and if there not suppossed to make sense then their not funny. some of your other writtens have been decent so i dunno whats up

second U WILL NEVER BE ACCEPTED ON HERE WITH THAT ACCENT
you either need to tone it down, speak clearer or at least spit some shit which is simple and makes sense.
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Re: Swagger Like M

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i'll go witht he clearer option lol

thanks fo the feed Cee
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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thing is dude... i've heard it and i didn't like it... reason i didn't like it cause of what DJ said... it sounded like you didn't write your lyrics to the beat but just wrote what u wanted to write and tried to flow with it over the beat... the accent is just strange man... ghost was a bit harsh... but harsh criticism honestly brings out the best in people... if u fall or fail pick yaself up dust yaself off and try try again... but sometimes for people they just quit for a while and work on what they need to improve on... but this wasn't good man... in fact this was probably one of the worst i've heard from u...
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Damnit, I Had Something To Say But After I Read Through These 2 Pages I Realized What I Was Gonna Say Has Already Been Said, An Then Some. I Don't Know About You But I Think I Would Rather Walk In On My O'l Lady getting Fucked In The Ass By 3 Dudes All Different Races Then Live Through That Feedback. Could Be Just Me Though..
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