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Your Antics Pester Who's Bent On Hype..!
Meaning The Only Way 'Yule Put Up A Fair Fight' - Is If 'Germanic Festivals Went On Strike!

nice all around bar no personal tho but still a 8/10

And..

Honestly..Ya Rhymes Suck - But I Enjoy How Cats Laugh At Em'
Cuz M Wouldnt Be 'Intense With Bars' - As 'A Boy Scout Rap Battling!'

another really good bar but nothin that made me go o shiiiit 8/10

Sheesh..

What A Bad Tragic End.. It Doesnt Take Much To Prove Ya A Dumbfounded Fool!
So While I Yawn,Lounge In School..We'll see if 'Municipal Owen'.. Out The 'Almshouses Poole'!

another good bar and kinda lost flow a little so 8/10

Pshh.. Wordplay = Menace A Pull A Win

Being Truthful..Illest Is Making Up This Fools Fate!
So Hows His Slates Enough To Boost Rates? When Dude wouldnt 'Move in For The kill'..If Jason Was His Roomate!'

great closer man good shit but not the best ive seen but better than menaces 8/10

Great verse man i like this one better than your verse against cee4 great shit. nothing that stuck out and made me go omg but still a very consistent verse good shit total 32/40



This guy's whole perspective and net record is a lie all fiction with No Facts to be Told..
Say you will but..Actually Won't! And if your the king well this means i'll be quik to slit the Majesty's Throat!!..

liked this bar good multis flow nice lil punch 8/10

Sit and watch while you Rapidly Fold screamin and pleadin While ya career Falls at Amazin Speeds..
No chance to save face and leave! So basically Imma reck this ho shit is been etched in stone like Masonry!!..

good shit nice punch nothin special tho 8/10

No erasin me sry son but the time as come for you say goodbye and Walk the Green Mile..
I spit hot he barely Speaks Mild not rugged or raw i'll leave em stuffed in a draw like Police Files!!..

loved this bar nice punch and flow 9/10

My punches hit joel venom heavy like soaked denom are you sure you wanna Cross this Young'n?..
I go full force when huntin! You winnin this event is happenin like mikes Tour in London!!..

liked this but your closer was a lil weak 7/10

ok great vesre but ur filler at the bottom killed it man. total 32/40 ok so ill go to cats

1:opener-Menace
1:closer-joel
2:flow-menace he never lost it and joel u lost it a lil on ur third bar
3:multis-tie
4:punches-id say a tie menace had harder ones in my eyes but his last line fell off which ment joels consistent ones caught up so ima say tie here
5:personals-niether really

Menace-10
joel-8

vote-menace great shit both of you id love to see a rematch maybe even an audio

This guy's whole perspective and net record is a lie all fiction with No Facts to be Told..
Say you will but..Actually Won't! And if your the king well this means i'll be quik to slit the Majesty's Throat!!..
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nothin special. was a decent bar but there was nothing clever about it. punchline was weak 5/10

Sit and watch while you Rapidly Fold screamin and pleadin While ya career Falls at Amazin Speeds..
No chance to save face and leave! So basically Imma reck this ho shit is been etched in stone like Masonry!!..
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average. punchline was ok but nothin personal about it 6/10

No erasin me sry son but the time as come for you say goodbye and Walk the Green Mile..
I spit hot he barely Speaks Mild not rugged or raw i'll leave em stuffed in a draw like Police Files!!..
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oki. nice idea but the punch should have been worded better. first line was cool. 6/10

My punches hit joel venom heavy like soaked denom are you sure you wanna Cross this Young'n?..
I go full force when huntin! You winnin this event is happenin like mikes Tour in London!!..
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first line was cool. second line was weak with the MJ shit. 5/10


overall the verse was solid but nothing more. you need to be more clever and less generic with the punchlines and try some wordplay. also your lack of punctuation can fuck the flow up slightly but its not a big issue. 22/40




Your Antics Pester Who's Bent On Hype..!
Meaning The Only Way 'Yule Put Up A Fair Fight' - Is If 'Germanic Festivals Went On Strike!
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decent bar. clever wordplay but its too generic and didnt really hurt Menace. 6/10



Honestly..Ya Rhymes Suck - But I Enjoy How Cats Laugh At Em'
Cuz M Wouldnt Be 'Intense With Bars' - As 'A Boy Scout Rap Battling!'
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not feelin this. ive heard that intense shit before. again theres nothing personal about this bar. 5/10


What A Bad Tragic End.. It Doesnt Take Much To Prove Ya A Dumbfounded Fool!
So While I Yawn,Lounge In School..We'll see if 'Municipal Owen'.. Out The 'Almshouses Poole'!
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nice try but the wordplay was horrible. if you hadnt explained it id have no clue what you meant. that may be down to differing accents but it aint working for me. 4/10

Being Truthful..Illest Is Making Up This Fools Fate!
So Hows His Slates Enough To Boost Rates? When Dude wouldnt 'Move in For The kill'..If Jason Was His Roomate!
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dope bar all round. missing a personal touch but still my favourite bar of the battle 8/10

Oveall the verse was hit and miss. Some of the wordplay didnt work for me but the last bar was good. The verse was also a bit generic but so was Menace`s. 23/40

VOTE DYNAMIQ


Close battle. Menace kinda played it safe and his verse was solid but not spectacular. Dynamiq went for it more,especially with the wordplay which had mixed results. Dynamiqs verse was more original and complex and so he gets my vote.

3-1 Uppin..

Thanx for the votes uppin

I have to say this was a good battle, but D pulled a cat sweep. Just cuz he swept doesnt mean it wasnt close. Like I said in ya scripture, Menace, if you connect your punches with your setup you should be all set.

Vote= Dynamiq

4-1 Up!

upping for votes..

-- 19 Sep 2009 22:25 --

upping for votes.

Uppin..

4-1 is a T.K.O. you just Lost.

Thnx for update..

lol. good battle menace.

-- 07 Oct 2009 12:02 --

still uppin this.

I vote for Dynamiq if it was a question.

-records updated-

-battle closed-