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Aiight man thanks for the vote 2-1 Evolution

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just in my defense, i'm in the middle of a relationship that's hanging by a string and the thought of it being over feels a bit refreshing no matter the pain, btw i like your verse orfadox, i see your improvement showing already

uppin for this battle, i think a week is long enough..

Imagery- Orfadox
As pretty much every1 else said i could picture it more

Flow- Evolution -
self explanatory

Storytelling- Orfadox
I just pictured a relationship ending in this verse, Evo's i pictured the common every1 break up

Stayed on topic- Tie

Overall--- Orfadox
Both were good drops for the topic, but IMO i enjoyed and got more about heartbreak from reading Orfadox verse...

Vote - Orfadox

Both Had Solid Pieces. I Thoroughly Enjoyed Them.

Ekoms Your Piece Flowed Smooth & Crisp Like A 100 Dollar Bill.
Could Have Used Some Tightening Up Here & There But This Was Your Best Part.

no worries about those who need control,
you'll really see what's beautiful when you leave the foe,
believe it so you can finally reach your goal,
we need that pain so we can breathe and grow,

Orfadox You Were Very Detailed in Your Drop. Maybe You Should Practice Rhyming A Little More Because You Fell Off in Some Parts. But This is A Topical & The Idea is To Create Much Imagery to The Reader As much As You Can. Your Best Part of The Drop

Feel her beauty near astounded when her ugly side rears
hide the tears the viscious words i choose not to hear
embrace the freedom pack up my bags and go im leaving
keep on walking until footsteps is the only thing im hearing
the rain heavy as i try to accept all if this heartache
confined in space these are the real pleasures of heartbreak

You Had Something There Man! Just Elaborate & Flow Off Of It!

However Due To A Topical MVGT: Orfadox

My Vote Goes To Evo

simply because he was more about the pleasures of heartache as mentioned above, Orf did mention them but it took a while to get into the full swing of where he was headin where as Evo dived in feet first and really got us going with some sick multies a dope flow and some emotion behind the lyrics, so yeah this was a good read i have to say both came with some good shit but at the end of it all Evo gets my vote

first topical battle I ever voted on.

Vote - Orfadox. If I'm going by the topic, I thot he held it together a bit nicer. Pretty close tho. His use of vocab and structured just fit the piece together better. Either way, nice drop to both.

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thanks for the votes guys if my calculations are correct thats 4-3

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Yepp. 4-3.

Imagery- Orfadox
Wording was more descriptive

Flow- Evolution
His rhymes were alot more complex

Storytelling- Orfadox
Evos was broader while orfs was more linear

Stayed on topic- Tie

Overall--- Orfadox

Both stayed on topic i just liked his take on it slightly better wish he used more intricate rhymes but he made a good use of vocabulary and imagery in this and imo they're two of the most important aspects of voting on a topical battle

good battle orfadox

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Move the topics when you close them, mother fucker, haha.