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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 4:02 am
by ~Symbolikull~
thanx Haz im get to our battle right now.... but yeah thats what i thought, ill imagery, substance and vocab, not to sound conceded but i liked it....
Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 4:09 am
by Haz
ill imagery<<< Word This Painted a Picture
Theories Of Destruction Fit it Fine....
Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 4:39 am
by Ambiguous Realm
i didn't care about the last line too much becuz it was kinda obvious it wasn't completely finished
Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:51 am
by ~Symbolikull~
i feel yuh bro, we all have our opinions, and i respect your feed back no matter what you say.
i take it all as constructive criticism.
Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 10:33 am
by 16 Micz
pretty dope, it wasnt all that good because its pretty simpel and easy to rhyme those words but u made it flow and structured it dope which made this dope, the multies vocab and rhyming was nice keep it up
fav lines:Hurt MC's wit Pencils Purposely, that Lead to a Cursed Agility,
Humanity and its Stenciled Durability cant handle Tension bein Pulled Vertically,
Inspect the Census Thoroughly, I advance thru Telekenetic Maturity,
We've been Accustomed to Fall, by believing in Justice by Law,
Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 12:09 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
gracias 16Micz
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 2:00 pm
by Lawgix
thats a really good drop man... love the vocab... it was off the chain... everything was tight man... keep that shit up... that right there proves the potential i see in u... keep it up dun ur doin good...
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 2:03 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
thanx homie, appreciate it
feelin the 21 love