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i can see where ur goin wit this piece...but as for the multis it wasnt a load...it was like a tear drop...but keep it up man...it was decent
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thanks, appreciate the feed
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EkomS wrote:
Yeah, but "poetic" and "energetic" don't rhyme - that's what Symbolikull was saying.
it does rhyme... as far as etic and etic...same shit eh..
Yes, SmokE, you're right, "etic" and "etic" rhyme. For that matter, he could've thrown in "pathetic". But the fact remains, those words don't rhyme - only pieces of them do - and that's just poor. Aside from that, he bolded them and he shouldn't have done that either.
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