Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 8:53 pm
I agree with Kurse, about your level of maturity being significantly higher then other members of Illest. (see Big P's latest drop).
"Time To Stop The " Beef " We Have And Use It To " Feed-The-Poor.. "
A Diffrence Between War n Peace, Yet Every One Wants A " Peace of WAR"
Dope..play on words.
I like the concept of this drop.
A few of the bars seemed well thought out, but still the piece wasn't immersed with substance.
A little more research and reality behind the bars would have been preferred.
"Kids Have Been Abused By This, Emitonaly Torn And Wont-Even-Speak..
Ive Been Victimised And It Feels Like My Cold Heart, Dont-Even-Beat"
If you're going to claim you have been victimized by racism, you should elaborate further on it. Not only would it be an intriguing story, but it would have fit perfectly in with this piece.
Most people can't relate to a bar, about white people being discriminated against because of their skin color. Though it does happen. You would need to clarify yourself.
Keep it up though man.
"Time To Stop The " Beef " We Have And Use It To " Feed-The-Poor.. "
A Diffrence Between War n Peace, Yet Every One Wants A " Peace of WAR"
Dope..play on words.
I like the concept of this drop.
A few of the bars seemed well thought out, but still the piece wasn't immersed with substance.
A little more research and reality behind the bars would have been preferred.
"Kids Have Been Abused By This, Emitonaly Torn And Wont-Even-Speak..
Ive Been Victimised And It Feels Like My Cold Heart, Dont-Even-Beat"
If you're going to claim you have been victimized by racism, you should elaborate further on it. Not only would it be an intriguing story, but it would have fit perfectly in with this piece.
Most people can't relate to a bar, about white people being discriminated against because of their skin color. Though it does happen. You would need to clarify yourself.
Keep it up though man.