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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 6:21 am
by Momeijah
ill Leave Feedback Later. Trubleman Were u On HipHopHitters.com Under The Name Born-2-Write Cuz i Recognize That Sig.
Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 8:04 am
by drunken jesus
he has a sembalance of structure he just didn't bar it off right, as for the piece it was alright a good bit of filler, not a whole lot of quotables, seems like you focused more on rhyming strings of words than the meaning of them cause a buncha strings were forced
it would've been better if you just took the best 16 lines and structured it into a verse, cause the piece as a whole is way too long to read and comment on most idiots are just gonna come in and discredit your multis without actually reading it cause of the title and everybody on the sites wild homoerotic fascination with multis
and yeah, llama is a type of gun, its also used as slang for any gun
Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 8:49 am
by 134282
Well, I'm happy to have learned another slang term for the word gun. But that one fact doesn't make this piece any better.
Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:08 am
by drunken jesus
good point el numero diablo
Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 10:35 am
by Dead Silence
yeah i didnt bother reading it first it was 2 long 2nd no structure like every one is saying
Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 10:36 am
by Dead Silence
oh yeah i did read the first line and i dont think that the bars really rymed lol
Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 11:48 am
by complexity
T.K.6 wrote:oh yeah i did read the first line and i dont think that the bars really rymed lol
You're not the smartest kid in a board full of retards
Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 3:36 pm
by 134282
ThatGuyYouHate wrote:Lol @ T.K.6 Being Glad Cuz Everyones Tryin To Hate Onna New Person So He's Gonna Help... Anywayz if You Were in NYC At Tha Number Dood And Listened To New York Catz Like Tha Whole D-Block Crew... You'd Hear Tha Word Llama Used Quite Frequently... Lol if You Need Actual Artist Names Check Jadakiss Sheek Styles And Jae Hood..
I think that right there sums up the confusion: I don't listen to Jada Kiss (or any of that D-Block crap), or Sheek Styles or Jae Hood... I accept that it's a commonly used term - albeit, one I've never heard - and therefore makes sense in Truble's piece... But as I mentioned earlier, it doesn't make up for the rest of the crap he so humbly entitled "multi master"...
I'm glad I was wrong, because this was just one more thing I learned today. And if I can recognize knowledge and benefit from it, then I emerge that much stronger than I was coming into the day. I thank you and appreciate the clarification on this new colloquialism.
Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 7:11 pm
by complexity
The feedback has been fairly positive. I don't know what you're talking about.
The piece was pretty straight, it had a lot of iffy statements though. Just work on making more sense.
Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:06 pm
by B-Bear
complexity wrote:
The piece was pretty straight, it had a lot of iffy statements though. Just work on making more sense.
Agree!