good stuff, its a real message and personal idea about how great u think you are
and even though u get slapped around and shit, ur still gonna keep getting better
naw im jp about the getting slapped around part. good stuff though keep it comin
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this whole thing was solid. there wasnt any quotables but like i said the whole thing was good. i liked the way you switched up your structure here. it makes it a lot easier to read although you can have long bars and still keep the flow. the message was good but come on Bill u are one of the most racist dudes on here lol. i mean in battles you like a racist punchline. so do i nothin wrong with it. anyway good work keep it up
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