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fuck haters
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Post by fuck haters »

i agree even knowing this battle was pretty sorry wait til you guys see me battle!
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Post by B-Bear »

haha.. my first battle verse...lol. ..so kinda expected to be heavy criticised.. but thanks for the votes.. 3-1
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Uppin` ..
We Needa Few More Votes ..
Let`s Get it Goin` ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Uppin` ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
RELL FiaSCO

aRViNCiBLE
SCiP
MiiLZ

Image[/align]
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Post by fuck haters »

i hazard won it too me he had better punchlines even if some of them didnt make sense!
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

2-3 ..
Uppin` ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
RELL FiaSCO

aRViNCiBLE
SCiP
MiiLZ

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Post by Mac »

-.RELL.FiaSCO.- wrote:Punches - Bear Had Betta Set Up Punches .. Well Structured Wit Tha Punches .. Which Made `em Okay ..

Wordplay - Alot Of attempts From Haz .. But i Don`t Give This Cat to Either One ..

Personals & Nameplay - Haz Had This Down .. Stayed On Top Of Bear`s Name .. Every Other Bar Was Talkin` about it ..

Multies - Haz .. i Thought He Had `em .. Even Though Some Was Forced ..

Creativity - None ..

Metas - Bear .. Enuff Said ..

Struture & Flow - Bear .. His Flow Was Easier to Catch & Read along Wit ..


Overall - Bear .. Both Of Y`all Came Lame IMO .. But i Think Bear Got This `cus He Had Betta Set Up Punches .. & Betta Structure .. Even Haz is Gettin` Better Wit That ..
I Agree Vote-Bear

I Know I Wasn't Gonna Vote, But If I Don't tHis Will Never End.
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Uppin` ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
RELL FiaSCO

aRViNCiBLE
SCiP
MiiLZ

Image[/align]
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Post by 16 Micz »

need i break it down

Vocab:bear
flow/structure:bear
multis:haz
similies/metas:bear( i really ddint see any metas)
creativity:bear
entertainment:neither
punches:bear
personals:haz
wordplay/nameplay:haz

overall: bear good battle both of you keep it up nice job...

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