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Ay Dont Diss Plz I Am Still In The Process Of Elevating'
Just Releasing Some Shit Offa My Chest..

To Tell The Truth Its My Baby That I Crave..
Get Knocked Off By The Way That She Behaved..
Like Wayne, "I-Feel-Like-Dying",Where Is The Slumber..
What Am I To Her,Just Another Number..
So Much For The Fuckin Equation,Theres "Another Guy"..
What To Do,Maybe Threat,Yeah,He Is "Gonna Die"..
Maybe Forget Her,Listened To Timberland,Realised It Was Too Late,To Appologize..
But Baby Should Behave,i Think This Worth Another Try..
Like Other Hoes Why She Tryin 2 Be A Playa,When U Aint Got No Game..
She Aint Realised She Wid The Wrong Lame..
Well After You Ppl Read The Song..
Plz Help Me See Why The Fuck Did She Lead Me On'..


Sorry..Flow Was Choppy..(Equation: Mitty+Emma=Forver) She Made That =[

Anyway..
Thanx For Readin[fade][/fade]

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well sum of the flow was choppy it was aiight
it was a slightly good read fo ya first drop
ya alright a bit like me when i started here a couple months ago
or 3 months anyway
hope ya elevate quickly
keep'em comin

Thanx Mayne'..I Aint Been On For Ages..Didnt Really Concentrate On The Whole Emcee Dream/Passion..(you Know School And Shit)

So Yeah..Thx For Da Feed Homie'

=)

This Was a Koo Drop Fam ..
Tha Flow Mos Deffo Chopped Up at Times ..
Like Tha Timb Line ..
Lil Extended ..
But i`m Pretty Sure This a Koo Audio Tho ..
I Liked How You Wrapped it Up ..
Get a Little More in-depth With Tha Reader Tho Fam ...
Props

Nice Read you like one of the few who still rap with emotions and your flow was chopped but who cares im pretty sure you rapped it to silence so dont worry about it