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Call Her Back
Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 9:15 pm
by Brah-Vo
Hey guys
New track
REALLY REALLY ROUGH copy.
I fell off beat quite a few times, was just experimenting how the lyrics would sound on the beat.
Abit short of breath too coz i was recovering from the flu a week before so.
Tell me what you think, if it's worth fixing up or not.
Leave a link to where u want me to leave feed.
peace.
Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 9:26 pm
by Brah-Vo
and uh, upon further revision.
The lengthening of the word "coz" in the hook is quite annoying.
Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 12:40 pm
by HKX
yo dis shit is decent man ur mic is real fucked up tho u need 2 get a new one dawg shit was blarin like a muthfucker overall i give it a 5/10 jus cuz of da quality but its koo man keep droppin them tracks dawg
Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 12:48 pm
by HKX
i jus noticed dat link shit yo i got dis track called YOUNG PUSSY check out it and leave a nigga sum feed peace
Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:26 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
I`m Sure If You Woulda Been Equipped This Woulda Been A lot More Than Decent ..
You Gotta Work On ya Breathin, Flow, and Delivery Tho ..
Ya Lyrics is There ..
But Juss Practice & i`m Sure U`ll Get Better Fam ..
Props For Postin it Tho ..
Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 10:31 am
by -TraMaTiK-
better then ur last drop that i remember son.as rell said work on those few things..ALOT. not tryna dis-courage u but u shud do it alottt before u do another track..somethin i shudda done too myself..but anyways keep droppin man i wanna hear improvement!
Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 7:36 am
by Viral
you need a new mic...lol...u got a straight voice for spittin...just need more emotion and wat not...sounds a bit like jin...but then again im high...so im prolly wrong..haha...but keep workin on ur shit man...if u need mixin help er ne thing...get at me