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Why i Kill - Part 1

Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 10:32 pm
by MagicMark
Killin' em slowly….
Im the King of the Game
I stay Great
But things aint the same
Too many trash rappers getting' praise
Gimme they names, they getting' slain
cause im the King of this Game..

Unstoppable force, people coppin' my fours, while your sixteens remain untouched
Kickin' till his brain is fucked , slittin' till his frame is earth, raps' got wack and its your name that's getting' blamed and such
Im better than ya'll, got tha' veteran scrawl, tha's why I never will fall, ill be forever great
n' never fake, break your tethers of veins, cause my name synonymous with flowin' till the end like a rivers fate
talkin'll get ya scraped, imma beast, unleashed, and you some fag's who been hatin'
n' my shows is real crazy, cause all my fans stand up like they the real slim shady
His boys saying he slain, they “cant believe itâ€

Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 10:48 pm
by - Mutual -
nice flow it went pretty well wot happened to ya sig by the way ya had a type of chamillionaire feel to this song it came out pretty strong keep'em comin

Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:04 am
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
This Was a Koo Drop ..
Some Punches Weren't Hittin as Hard as Others ..
That Premier Eletricians Line Came Off Nice ..
Couple Of Multies Were Forced, Slipped Up Tha Flow a Tad Bit ..
Very Cocky Joint, I Liked That Part Bout it ..
Umm .. Tha Closer Was Good ..
Overall Solid Drop Man ..

Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:07 am
by MagicMark
thanks man, i see what you saying

this was kinda a keystyle, i kept writing and hadda leave as i was finishing, so instead of reviewing it and fixing places i jus' decided to post it up, as is

More of a swag drop like you said..

part 2 shall be bigger and better lol..