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first track ive done in a couple months

BIG PROPS TO KURSE OF AME FOR THE MIXING AND MASTERING

lol Stop Tryna Take Waynes Flow it Ain WOrkin 4 U
Whoeva Did Da Hook Was Pretty Decent..
i Liked the Beat...
I Ain Like ya Lyrics Or Delivery On This Homie
i Think U Should Really Listen To Otha People Otha Den Wayne
ya Flow N Whole Rhyme Scheme'll Change.. Keep Droppin Don't Get Discouraged
Work on ya Flow And ya Prescence..

LMFAO at waynes flow

i wasnt even tryin

im not lieing at all thats just how i do it

but thanks for the feed.

btw some one sles said the same thing bout me havin a wayne swagger

Lmfao It's Not a Wayne Swagger Son
it's Wanna be Wayne flow That doesnt Sound right At all
no Hate Kid i'm Tryna Help you

heard dis shit 2day yo Haz I dunno where u got wayne 4rm but dis nigga sounds nuthin like wayne lol track was decent didnt like how ya'll presented urself on da mic tho maybe if u would've shown more presence on it than I would say sumthin else but u need 2 get on ur mic presence cuz its not there and dats important when layin down a song. I give dis a 4/10 cuz all u really need 2 do is get a better mic, put sum nutz in ur flow cuz it sounded like ya'll was jus goin right thru it even da talkin on ur track was better than da rhyme u spit don't wanna seem like an asshole but its my opinion. Think u should also revise ur rhyme and practice it and find ur style as well cuz than da song well jus sound plain wit no emotion added into it u gotta make us feel da track nigga feel me so yea keep droppin kid

i mixed dat shit....n sent it to u?...wtf did u do wit it?...cuz da version u got up...is da version u sent me dat sounds all echoed n effected out.....dont ask me to fuckin mix shit for u n then not use it....dat big bri is decent....his quality sucks tho..have dude record wit u...or get a new mic...can only do so much wit bad quality...like ur vocals r alot more clear n wat not


but heres my version

im sorry viral.

i forgot to put up ur version too.
i was gonna.

but kurse did that version.

imnsorry

both versions were mixed good... just no delivery... or presence... flow was kinda off too... either way tho i liked the lay out of the song... hook was okay... it was decent... but nothing too exciting...