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ok so heres a new song..i kno some parts are kinda like..low or sound muffled,its cuz i dont got that good of a pop filter and i dont wanna scream entirely at the mic lol but anyways..leave some feed if ya wud..its a story tellin song

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6928177

i always like your choice of beats, i'm thinking bout using this too...

flow was good, consistent throughout the song...

lyrics were average, but you were telling a story so i wouldn't care too much...

and i like your choice of topics, very real...

nice drop...

Beat's pretty sick, ain't gon lie! I'd definately fuck wit sum shit like that personally cuz I enjoy alot of Phil Collins material.
Lyrically it's solid, but tracks by you usually are. I can tell you're workin hard on showing more emotion, and your doubled-vocals are more on point then they used to be. So elevation from you is obvious.
You're definately coming along.
True, mixing and equipment could be better, but outside of those lil things, ur gettin better and that's all that matters at the moment.
You just need more time in the booth to find urself as a "finished" product. I deep down don't think you've found the full version of "you" yet...I can hear the elevation and the experimenting in your material which is a clue that you're not yet fully satisfied with what you're hearing yet.
But keep at it. With time in the booth, more songs and more experience...you'll get what you're in search of in due time. It just takes a while.

thanks for the feed both of u, uppin