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It's freedom to speak
that'll be reachin the weak,
It's say what you want,
with a reason beneath,
So take a breath of fresh air,
it's the season to breathe,
The time where poverty ends,
and we're all leavin the street,
No more violence to live,
and the feelin is free,
Free as the wind,
i'll let it carry me on,
Until this earth is destroyed,
and everything's gone.

Pretty dope. I liked the rhyme scheme and the simplicity of it. You can make your own interpretation type of poetry instead of laying everything out.

Short n sweet(in a really demented sort of way) n to the point. I like it.

demented? haha, appreciate the feed

Thought I would toss you some feed back, I like the feel of this shit, sorta calming in a way, you're pretty good at droppin emotion in these, Hey perhaps we should collab on something, Im bored as shit in my writing lately, well hit me up if you're down.

nice drop, its smooth as hell, interesting rhymescheme in it but it was still pretty poetic, nice quick read