There's no meaning of faith it only depends on choice./
Life's just a haste and I'm yelling with no voice./
There isn't a reason for heartache./
But there's always mistakes./
How much can your heart take in a lonely world./
A broken heart needs to be re-pasted to it's original form./
Now a shattering emotion comes to say./
No more hurt to me none today./
As I lay and sit and think./
Lonely, how deep can my heart sink./
Like a bottomless pit of no end./
Really I sit with no friend./
No love, no one in my life./
A cold shrug, or a brush can't make things right./
Making a form of love that isn't real./
Something you thought to be true and you'd kill./
Time to think is anything worth this much hurt./
Even if there is a family problem you don't want to make it work?./
Now I'm tossed in the dirt and thrown down./
Like a poet lost in his work with no one around./
No one to share his true emotions./
In my mind you're the only person I'm holding./
But do you see a us anymore?./
You know I'd do anything I'd give you the world./
I know I can't make it./
I know my mistake is./
What ever goes down I have to see and know what to do first./
Cause either I'm a forget you and that will just be worse./
As I set in this chair and write out my emotions./
Love is a word so true that for us it could be spoken./
Well in my eyes it feels that way./
But you're gone and you been for seven days./
I'm down right now waiting for you to bring me up./
But maybe you left me for more then family problems that would be to much./
I see that you're meant for me./
And possibly you don't love thee./
So the thought have change maybe you don't miss me./
Maybe this could be your change in actions it just could be./
I just wouldn't and couldn't believe./
You hurting me purposely./
Faith
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not bad, more of a topical spit then a poem, with the format and everything, but i liked it, and you closed it out nicely, keep writin,
i noticed one thing, your trying to rhyme was restricting the vocab, poems arent all about rhyming just be creative, peeace
i noticed one thing, your trying to rhyme was restricting the vocab, poems arent all about rhyming just be creative, peeace
facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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