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Good Luck, homie!

Bitch hush as I lead off with this uplifting rush.
Your face I crush, cause 'Def' is always straight to the flush.
Tossed to the street but I'm hungry, so I can stand on my feet
'$incEar' sounds...sweet. I'm a carnivore! So he's just something to eat.
I'm vampiric...But its this bitch that raps with lyrics bitten!
I'm fuckin'...the large intestine of this obese white woman
I battle in blue mist, persistant about '$in' pre-existing as an ovarian cyst
My list. Sit, twirl, fists uncurl and get castrated to avoid contaminating the world
Riddle me this! What does this ugly faggot do when he's horny?
He shits in his hand and jerks off lonely. (FUCKIN' NASTY!!!)
So as I think this mother fucker has lost his mind.
I'll close his eyes like a venetian blind!
Its a shame you battle gentle like Autumn when it rains.
I guess '$incEar' fits yeah cause it isnt a dope name
Now your red faced with a cold flow
cause bitch...the wind blows in this sled race!

haha nice verse homie

It Turns out I had some free time on the comp ...so allow me to Elaborate..

Ehum

EXPO's
(Def Cant Hear Through the Ear)
(Reason is a Program that Makes Beats/Beat = Beat Down)
(wood Connects the Door hinges, wood/would =Prime wordplay)
(Journey's is a Shoe Store..)



Its Clear that you "FEAR-ME"!!,You Can't Slander or Smear Me My Name is Damn Nearly the Thing it Appears to Be How The Fuck Can *DEF* Beat Me ? He cant Even "HEAR-ME"!!,(haha)

I've "HAD-it-with-CAKE'S"!!, & "INADEQUATE-FAKE'S"!!,I'll Slash up your Face with a Passionate Hate You'll Get a *BEAT* Down for no 'Reason` Call Him A "TRAGGIC-MISTAKE"!!,

"COMPELLED-to-the-GAME"!!,Expellin "SHELLZ-to-ya-FRAME"!!,My Flow Can Hold One "HELL-of-a-FLAME"!!,But Def's a Coward with the Battles infact the Only Time Your *IN-IT*'s When your "SPELLIN-ya-NAME"!!,

My "WORDS-COLLECT"!!,As I Disect This "VIRGIN-THREAT"!!,Get Merged in Text Murdered & Left Observed What's Next You Got No *DRIVE* to Hold 'Control` I'll leave you in a "NERVOUS-WRECK"!!

Dawg My Scripts are "MORE-VIVID"!!,ok your "SORTA-INVENTIVE"!!,But Punch for Punch I Got a Hunch & Suspect I Doubt Ya Barz *WOOD* Connect Like "DOOR-HINGES"!!

I'm A "MENACE-in-the-MOOD"!!,To Let my "SENTENCES-PROVE"!!, That if Rappin Was a *JOURNEY* You Couldnt "KICK-it-with-SHOE"!!,

both decent verses, im gonna have to say it was a cat sweep by sincear tho

vote- sincear

Lmfao ..

Nice Battle Yall ..

Consistency - Def.. His Verse Sorta Held The Same Level All Around
While Sin Had Some Line's That jus Setup At Firs N Den Hit hard..
Multis - Sin
Punchlines - Sin
Wordplay - Sin
Nameplay - Sin
Flow - Tie.
Enjoyment - Sin

Overrall Vote - Sin..


Deff Keep Battlin Dood you'll Get Better ,
Jus Work On ya Punchlines And Wordplay.
Plus use Multi's So you Can Do Multi Punchlines..
ANd When U Write a Punchline Don't jus One Line it..
Come With a Good Set Up.. So Lets Say

............................................ (Then)
BAM!....

Jus Like a Quick 4 Jabs Followed By a Haymaker..


Vote - Sin

uppin for summn lol

can we get sum votes plz

Sin,
Due to Better Punches & Set Ups ..Multies Were Nice, Flow Was Nice ..

Def U Needa Work On More Direct & Powerful Hits ..
Ya Flow is On Point, Jus Work On Tha Elements U Usually Look For in Battles ..
Such as Punches, Wordplay, Nameplay Etc.

Vote - Sin