Hip Hop Forum

the Sun Rises or the Gun Rises, either can stun the wisest//
ur eyes are suprised to see, tides to sea, but its an opportunity//
to let ur lies free, let a fly free, or just lay beside me//
get away from society, n flow variety, with notoriety//
the irony, is pumping iron, others are pumping Iran//
harder then hydrants, provoking violence with spoken silence//
Al Quada guides ants with guidance, they end up full fledged tryants//
n we tie rants to bin laden, under the alliance that we've bin lawed-in//
its "a lie since", we were first convinced, that our president was right//
and the justice, "metaphorical tints from justice", is just-this//
it still needs a just ment, i think they forgot what a just meant//
my words cause concussions, leave ya flawed in disgusting discussions//
and ur jaw cracks like nothin, i'm the dealer thats give you crack for nothing//
an addiction like sniffing, upchucking when you listen, is it worth the bitching//
i'm a fucking christian, but i'm sinning, n grinning, with the text inchin//
cuz my "key" is going to start ignition, even if you dont digg dissin//
to be honest this is all a distraction, and each of you were trapped in//
dont feel bad, take action, but guess what for each contraction//
is a contraption, stuck in an abstraction, we are all in an retraction//
so when i say action, its an intelligent caption, that goes above rappin//

and the justice, "metaphorical tints from justice", is just-this//
it still needs a just ment, i think they forgot what a just meant//

my favorite line some pretty nice rhyming topic was ok ill give it a 8.5/10 this may only be me but when u constantly use bars to make the reader stop and think it kind of gets annoying who knows maybe its just me and im stupid but yea good piece ill be adding this..