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4-6 bars, due 48 hours after checking
No biting, etc.

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Read the rules and get acquainted too, C.

ADD:Judge C-Munny's second verse post

I guess I'll start

Call a doctor please, I'm in critical condition
No respect for anyone despite rank and position
I have an odd dispostion and attack with precision
Accurate decisions making tiny incisions
I Go hard like metal so I need a black-smith
If I kill a nigga I'll just say its a accident
I'm crazy so I need solitary confinment
I'm not that great so my flow needs refinment
But I'm good enough to stand next to the best
East coast nigga waging war on the west

Just so you know man, both people post "check" before it starts

And It's only one verse judged on disses, multies, word-play, etc.
so if you want to, you can spit somethin' else. (no offense)

He's my check and verse

for this easy battle...I give you a pity-thank
but you never "C-money" like it's in ya piggy bank

Even if I spit a blank hit, my picture'll still be painted
you're rap game just like your av...completely tainted

I'm a kingpin, you're just another rook-in-this-place
even that dude* agrees with me by the look-on-his-face

don't laugh at me, ain't nothin bout me-funny
I got complex bills, over your ABC-Money

when I spit-a-rhyme, I strive for winner-lines
in 10 ten years , you'll be washed up like dinner-time




*Avatar

Check...and ya I'll spit again xD

You're mass efeckt? well then I am resistant
You can't harm me no matter how presistant

Yeah I'm tainted, tainted with skill
If you are so effective then how come i can't feel

You're named after a game where a girl takes off her clothes
Thats the only sexuality you have ever known

Son you got bills, I got stacks of cash
I'm here to inform you: your effect is not mass

I'm a shape-shifting monster so call me envy*
And I'm a homunculi* so you cannot end me

So In conclusion, I say we revoke your title
Just put down your mike and start a piano recital


*Guy in my avatar
*Group of people from FMA who can't die

Well...I probably lost >.>

mass effekt took a cat sweep on this one
ill break it down later if i get a complaint but

vote-mass effekt

vote mass effekt..

i dont see a no-flipping specified here but thats apart of house rules.

cat sweep to Mass Effekt.

the other dude needs to do less hyping himself and actually diss his opponent. Mass verse was a bit basic but i can already see an improvement in your verses.