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Travel the stars like star wars
I am hard u niggaz are card board
Flow like life but spit pure death
Lyrics so raw they'll leave you deaf
But I can switch it up and give you life
Like a surgeon I'll take you under the knife
Flip flop again bitch I'm a butcher
My jokes are funny like ashton kuthcer
I'll disect your rhyme
And catch you every time
You contradict and lie
And make sure you die
I'm lyricaly retarted
Go hard like a spartan
Armed like MJOLNIR
Get the dirt off my shoulder

Well,
It Ryhmes........

"Travel the stars like star wars
I am hard u niggaz are card board"

Was Prolly Your Hardest Line^^
Fell Off After That Though. You Needa Develope A Structure. So That Shit Aint Just Everywhere.

Keep Droppin Though.

pretty basic piece, everyones gotta start somewhere, keep practisin dude

Yeah that was pretty basic but it did rhyme.
Keep droppin man and you will increase the volume and appeal to your rhymes

I'm still trying to make up rhymes of my own too.
I really suck at it, but oh well...