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all fair votes accepted

cats:

Flow
nameplay
Personals
Wordplay/mettas
entertainment
Multies
structure

drop asap..

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EDIT**** by the way, magics battle record was W-8 L-7 when i dropped my verse, thought id point it out cause its relevant for my first bar

expose: its pretty self explanitory but just in case

splinter, <-- lol the rat from ninja turtles

took em roughly 2 weeks to drop against plex so he never responded, also "drop with complexity"

magic jonson, played for the lakers, probably dont have to explain

"i make it rain".. song by "lil wayne".. his avatar

we all know what a pun is.. also "big pun" is fat.. lol so "gigantic waist/waste"

pullin a hattrick = 3 wins, i just won my last 2 battles




if ur gonna ride the "extra mile" that my rap'll-measure.. better check yer saddle-tethers
cause this cat'll-wreck-verbs, ur not on my level... man im "one up" like ur battle-record

im ill, so with-pure-sickness i spit-fer-illest, give u a better ass kicking than the one splinter-witnessed
im more potent than a swisher-hit-is, so dude this battles almost as pointless as all of ur scripture-disses

ur sick.. but im coppin-tha-remedy, ull rot-as-my-enemy, cause i come out on top-as-a-text-emcee
ur style now? is like when i began ta rap.. cause u just took 2 weeks to "drop-with-complexity!"

this is tragic...im-harder, ur bodys weak n u match-it-with-bars-sir
this is a feast! but like the lakers? i only consider "magic-a-starter"

good avatar choice... but dont worry man, an unbrella will put a cease-ta-sediment
cause this dude only brings a "lil wayne" like im speakin with a speach-impediment! (get it? lol)

cant match the drama my-antics-make, im original.. but you? we could try-and-replace
dude tries to write a punch with a "big pun".. n it just ends up as a "gigantic-waist" (haha)

pass me a weapon... just make sure the clip is full-n-i'll-blast-it
if this kids really magic.. why am i the one whos pullin-a-"hat-trick"?

dude tried ta bump shoulders... but just "air brushed" me like magazine-art
the fag-has-been-scarred, im a hitman... cause when i grab a "mag-i-c-mark"

nice shit...

not this nice tho.. lol.. lets make it a classic

*expos*
his names chris, he battle rec is 8+ - after this it'll be +7
Prec/ise - pronounced - ice...
Precise = accurate aka truthful..
Christopher = half iranian.. ran/scared
chris/miss - christmas
ice/ise - titanic was sunk by ice in 1912, titanic/major
In his sig it says he writes in invisible ink.. highlighted* - interactive ish.. lol

....


'angry pimp' this faggot, stay 'hittin' hoe's", 54's you know im grippin' those
rippin' shows, dickin' foes, good thing the rules saya "no flippin'", cause even "Magic", cant turn "SHIT - To - GOLD"!!!!

so imma kill-this-lil-fak-uh' .. this kid "too balls", like where fell-as-can-place-cups
Ironically.. Battle Rec's can change, but after this you still-gettin'-ATE-UP!!.. (8 up)

get real.. im known to rip-up- fakers, like 'protectin' maths', i 'diss-figure- haters"
Special olympic boxin', ya "every punch was retarded", so imma put the "blades to ise/ice" like Figure-Skaters!!!!

Ya shots 'miss my mouth', like when kissin's-done, 'quasi moto' him, ring his "bell", he gettin-'lumped'..
Hot shit', im spittin-some, you rippin'-none.. so its a guarantee, after this "P's on the Floor".. like when ya Pissin',-Drunk!!...

Make you show my punches are Highlights (haha)..fuck ya invisible ink!.. this fella's-a-fool..
People can say "they the sickest battler", i'll say "you aint 'precise", - but you could be TELL-in'-the-TRUTH!!(LOL)

you a drunken fuck, you aint a 'bitch to remember', im burnin' him up, then "killin' the embers"
Easy to BeaT!!..Kids get excited when he come, cause they know that "chris-miss" like the 25th-of-de-cember!!..

You Wack-an-a-lame-fuck, my similies wreck ya, i 'picture' murders', so i can "see" me "damage-ya-'frame',-bruv".. Ya got a style that someone "average-would-change-up"(lol)..
So, After this you gone, scared.. can tell them "I-Ran".. like "Back-where-ya-came-From"!!! (Double!.. you get it..)

fuckin' with me?.. haha.. you might-be-dead, my punches create thunder, and are lightnin'-fed
Like Escorts by Credit cards, imma "swipe-his-head", "ice" aint scary...aint caused any "'titanic' damage", since 1912!!..


vote up!

my names not chris, and im not half iranian, LMAO nice verse tho dude

precise wrote:
Personal Information
Age: 16
Martial Status: Single
Name: Christopher
Race: Mixed( British and er Iranian)
Sex: Male

Drugs
Drink/Smoke: Yes/yes.
Hard Drugs: Cocaine, Marijuana
Starting Age: 14
Gateway Drug: Buckleys head and cold night rub
Daily/Weekly/Monthly: Monthly

?....



EDIT* what the hell? whered u find that? lol i never wrote that, -Precise

could we get some votes?

Quotables:

this battles almost as pointless as all of ur scripture-disses

ur style now? is like when i began ta rap.. cause u just took 2 weeks to "drop-with-complexity!"

dude tries to write a punch with a "big pun".. n it just ends up as a "gigantic-waist"

if this kids really magic.. why am i the one whos pullin-a-"hat-trick"?

People can say "they the sickest battler", i'll say "you aint 'precise", - but you could be TELL-in'-the-TRUTH!!



Flow - Neither really had good rhythm, mark edged it though
nameplay - Tie both had one good line, magic tryed it more but it was stretched
Personals - Precise easy, none of magic's were applicable
Wordplay/mettas - Precise his lines connected alot better
entertainment - Precise
Multies - Close but Mark
structure - Close but Precise, both lacked structure though

vote - precise, magic may've had a chance if his info was right

1-0 Precise..

thanks for the vote..

been over a week..votes needed in this battle(upped)

if ur gonna ride the "extra mile" that my rap'll-measure.. better check yer saddle-tethers
cause this cat'll-wreck-verbs, ur not on my level... man im "one up" like ur battle-record

TOO SIMPLE...WASNT FEELIN..MULTIS WERE EHHH...

im ill, so with-pure-sickness i spit-fer-illest, give u a better ass kicking than the one splinter-witnessed
im more potent than a swisher-hit-is, so dude this battles almost as pointless as all of ur scripture-disses

DECENT PERSONAL HERE...

ur sick.. but im coppin-tha-remedy, ull rot-as-my-enemy, cause i come out on top-as-a-text-emcee
ur style now? is like when i began ta rap.. cause u just took 2 weeks to "drop-with-complexity!"

ANOTHER DECENT PERSONAL, MULTIS WERE BAD THOUGH

this is tragic...im-harder, ur bodys weak n u match-it-with-bars-sir
this is a feast! but like the lakers? i only consider "magic-a-starter"

LOL, THIS WAS YA BEST LINE SO FAR...

good avatar choice... but dont worry man, an unbrella will put a cease-ta-sediment
cause this dude only brings a "lil wayne" like im speakin with a speach-impediment! (get it? lol)

YEAH WASNT FEELIN THIS

cant match the drama my-antics-make, im original.. but you? we could try-and-replace
dude tries to write a punch with a "big pun".. n it just ends up as a "gigantic-waist" (haha)

YEAH, THIS WAS DOPE...

pass me a weapon... just make sure the clip is full-n-i'll-blast-it
if this kids really magic.. why am i the one whos pullin-a-"hat-trick"?

AHAH, I LIKED THIS ISH

dude tried ta bump shoulders... but just "air brushed" me like magazine-art
the fag-has-been-scarred, im a hitman... cause when i grab a "mag-i-c-mark"

NO.







'angry pimp' this faggot, stay 'hittin' hoe's", 54's you know im grippin' those
rippin' shows, dickin' foes, good thing the rules saya "no flippin'", cause even "Magic", cant turn "SHIT - To - GOLD"!!!!

OK BAR...MULTIS WERE WEAK

so imma kill-this-lil-fak-uh' .. this kid "too balls", like where fell-as-can-place-cups
Ironically.. Battle Rec's can change, but after this you still-gettin'-ATE-UP!!.. (8 up)

DECENT, FLOW WAS TERRIBLE

get real.. im known to rip-up- fakers, like 'protectin' maths', i 'diss-figure- haters"
Special olympic boxin', ya "every punch was retarded", so imma put the "blades to ise/ice" like Figure-Skaters!!!!

EHH...NOT FEELIN...FORCED

Ya shots 'miss my mouth', like when kissin's-done, 'quasi moto' him, ring his "bell", he gettin-'lumped'..
Hot shit', im spittin-some, you rippin'-none.. so its a guarantee, after this "P's on the Floor".. like when ya Pissin',-Drunk!!...

MEDIOCRE...

Make you show my punches are Highlights (haha)..fuck ya invisible ink!.. this fella's-a-fool..
People can say "they the sickest battler", i'll say "you aint 'precise", - but you could be TELL-in'-the-TRUTH!!(LOL)

NICE LIL FLIP HERE, MULTIS WERE OFF

you a drunken fuck, you aint a 'bitch to remember', im burnin' him up, then "killin' the embers"
Easy to BeaT!!..Kids get excited when he come, cause they know that "chris-miss" like the 25th-of-de-cember!!..

PLAYED...

You Wack-an-a-lame-fuck, my similies wreck ya, i 'picture' murders', so i can "see" me "damage-ya-'frame',-bruv".. Ya got a style that someone "average-would-change-up"(lol)..
So, After this you gone, scared.. can tell them "I-Ran".. like "Back-where-ya-came-From"!!! (Double!.. you get it..)

ANOTHER OK BAR...

fuckin' with me?.. haha.. you might-be-dead, my punches create thunder, and are lightnin'-fed
Like Escorts by Credit cards, imma "swipe-his-head", "ice" aint scary...aint caused any "'titanic' damage", since 1912!!..

NO^^


OVERALL IM GONNA HAVE TO GIVE THIS TOO PRECISE
HE CAME WITH MUCH BETTER FLOW N MULTIS..
HIS PUNCHES WERE MORE CONSISTANT ALSO...

VOTE: PRECISE

VOTE precise


Cats sweep in mah oppinion, better punchges, stucture....and Complexity!

dunno if magic will accept that vote quix..i'll let him decide, i personally thought precise won this hands down but im not gonna vote cuz he's in my crew,

3-0 (...waiting for magic to accept or deny quix's vote)

i'll leave this unlocked but i'm updating this as a k.o.

giving magic a week to decide if he accepts quix's vote so i can change it

-records updated-





P.S. .... precise's name is chris? lol i was told it was donny, can someone inform me on this one

yea my names donny, lol, n im not half iranian

yea ur a stupid canadian fuckbag, n e ways u missed the tournament ho, lol nice time to show up after it, guess this settled then since someone else locked the battle