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Back From the War's

Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 5:30 pm
by Chernobyl
There's No Sense In/lord to witness it/when im the sickest to rip it/
When I'm whippen out Skillet's/grillen these simplistic Children/
try n kill the Beast/who's the illest poppin Pills Killen Beats/
doin things u simply Cant/with my 9 Lives i do drive by's out the side of mini vans/dog ur far from Raw/ watch darkness fall/n get blindsided like R son Dull/ur the most retarted Soft/Muthfucken Sucka that had to get carted off/
dog he Started it/talken all that hard shit/now the retarded bitch/
jus Painted himself a harmless target/faggot Please/U claim to to aim
the Gat n sqeezw/for the fact that you sag ya Jeans/i load up Magazines/
It's a tragic scene/when i Smash ya dream's/With Bland Rhymes/Cuz Dude Love
my Rhymes Like Mankind/This guy/Claims to rip rhymes/until i spit sick Rhymes/
while all these critic's Sit in Line/Im'a ticken Time Bomb/kicken this shit
till the minute that i'm gone/Spitten Slug's When/i listen for russian's comen/
Busten Pump's wnen/when i summons revenge in minutes a therapist slash terrorist embarrassing this American/i Kill it wit lines/Stealin Lives/whenever i load up slugs n slip clip's n 9's/remember im the sickest wit rhymes/

Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2008 10:36 pm
by Haz
On Some shit...
Ya Flow Went hard in This...
Liked The Flow the Most..
you Had Multi's 2...
You should Up ya Punchlines n Wordplay
But Flow Wise N How the Verse Wus Pieced Togetha..
You did a Good job