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Behind A Smile

Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2008 5:11 pm
by Young K
Recorded it a couple days ago, i think I'm getting better at mixing but what do i know...


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Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 4:50 am
by Dead Silence
real good stuff

i like that little intro u have

flow is up to par

lyrics were straight as usual
and ur emotion in it is real good

keep it up

Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 6:51 am
by Young K
thanks fam appreciate it

Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 7:37 am
by Kurse
Yea...the mixing is getting better. For sum reason (and I dunno if it's just me)...but the mixing toward the beginning of the song wasn't too bad, kinda solid. But then quality-mix wise...it sounded like it got a lil sloppier towards the end. (like i said...could be just me, I am a little tired right now so I'd have to give it another listen when I'm more attentive)

Lyrically alright, nuthin over the top. Didn't really feel it lyrically towards the end on that bridge. Beat was so/so.

I'd have to say 6/10

Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 7:41 am
by Young K
thanks appreciate it

Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:59 am
by precise
not bad, id still suggest turnin the volume up on ur verse, its not quite balanced out with the beat, not really the style of song i usually listen to, but u did an aright job, chorus was pretty decent u seem to have good creativity when it comes to layin down a track

Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:00 pm
by Young K
appreciate it