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Cats
Punches
Nameplay
Wordplay
Metaphors
Multies
Flow
Entertainment

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I'm "SMOOTHER-than-BUTTER"!!,U Can't "MANEUVER-ya-CLUTTERED"!!,I'll take the Roof off ya Top & Move to the Cubbords Then Clean out ya *INSIDES* Like "MOOSE-to-a-HUNTER"!!,
An Ass Whoopin you can 'Count` on Call it a "NUMBER"!!,Battle Cry Sound like Thunder Eat Rappers For Hunger Eat U & ya Crew Believe I *WOOD* Like "LUMBER"!!,& Make Sure You 'Catch` the *BEAT* like "DRUMMERS"!!,
Pack Heat Like Summer I'll Rip ya "ORGANS-in-HALF"!!,With the "FORCE-of-a-BLAST"!!,I'm a Tourch Your a Match I'm Ignorin your Ass I'ma Scourcher Your Wack! I'll Have Your Faith Feelin Out of Place like a "MORMON-in-MASS"!!,
My Flow is Rated *R* *SON* thats *ALL* In a "DAYS-WORK"!!,Who Set the *R-SON* A 'Blaze` First? I'll Make The *SON*'s Flow look Like an Abortion` Cause ya Elevations "LATE-BIRTH"!!

Gettin Ripped? Son i Believe it`s U, "Wave ya Pride" away When The Eagle`s Blew ..
Quick to "Eat Up This Textcee" Make Sure "Sin is Stirred / Sinistered" Like i`m "Cookin Evil Stew" ..
Hairstylist Of illest, U`ll Curl Up N Die, U Tha Type to Find Out ya Girl is a Guy, But Still Blow His Cock ..
Ya Unfocus Drops, ya Presense is Not Here, i`m Quick to "Stop Sears / Cears" Like "Foreclosing Shops" ..
So Heavy Wit This Rap Shit, Mah Mic Might Bend, So Fresh Shit Even Dikes Might Spend ..
They Like Mah Grin, Similar to "Practice Of Baptizing" How Mah "Flows" Quick to "Wipe Out Sin" ..
Niggas Know i`ll Bomb They Raps, i Don't Even Gotta Palm Tha Gats, Hogtied in tha Trunk Wit ya Moms in Back ..
This is One For ya Mind, Sin One Of a Kind? Nah "Ear Replaceble/irreplaceble" Like "Beyonce Tracks" ..

Punches - Rell
Nameplay - Rell Came With Betta Plays , But Sin came ill
Wordplay - Sin Edged it.More Snappy.
Metaphors - Tie
Multies - Sin
Flow - Rell
Entertainment - Rell
Overrall Vote - Rell..


Rell Deff Went off In this Battle,
When i read Sin's verse i Was like "Woooord"
Then this nigga jus Came Hard As Hell Afta .. Nice Wordplay
Punches Wus Bananas... Sin U Had Some Nice Bars 2 ...

Rell jus got The Upper Hand.. holla..

Punches:Rell
Nameplay:Rell
Wordplay:Sin
Metaphors:Rell
Multies:Sin
Flow:Sin
Entertainment:Rell

overall:rell


thought sin came pretty weak in this one, rell's last line i thought by itself took nameplay and punches, as much as i find multis entertaining it wasn't satisfying enough to entertain meso the next thing i'd look at is the punches

..( R.SON.aLL ).. wrote:Gettin Ripped? Son i Believe it`s U, "Wave ya Pride" away When The Eagle`s Blew ..
Quick to "Eat Up This Textcee" Make Sure "Sin is Stirred / Sinistered" Like i`m "Cookin Evil Stew" ..
Hairstylist Of illest, U`ll Curl Up N Die, U Tha Type to Find Out ya Girl is a Guy, But Still Blow His Cock ..
Ya Unfocus Drops, ya Presense is Not Here, i`m Quick to "Stop Sears / Cears" Like "Foreclosing Shops" ..
So Heavy Wit This Rap Shit, Mah Mic Might Bend, So Fresh Shit Even Dikes Might Spend ..
They Like Mah Grin, Similar to "Practice Of Baptizing" How Mah "Flows" Quick to "Wipe Out Sin" ..
Niggas Know i`ll Bomb They Raps, i Don't Even Gotta Palm Tha Gats, Hogtied in tha Trunk Wit ya Moms in Back ..
This is One For ya Mind, Sin One Of a Kind? Nah "Ear Replaceble/irreplaceble" Like "Beyonce Tracks" ..

I'll vote later..but let me say rell I Know you prolly knew you had this in the bag..but find other ways to set up bars..and don't use "LIKE" And "Quick To" All the time...

I'm "SMOOTHER-than-BUTTER"!!,U Can't "MANEUVER-ya-CLUTTERED"!!,I'll take the Roof off ya Top & Move to the Cubbords Then Clean out ya *INSIDES* Like "MOOSE-to-a-HUNTER"!!,

LOL, shit made me laugh, but wasn't hitting too hard

An Ass Whoopin you can 'Count` on Call it a "NUMBER"!!,Battle Cry Sound like Thunder Eat Rappers For Hunger Eat U & ya Crew Believe I *WOOD* Like "LUMBER"!!,& Make Sure You 'Catch` the *BEAT* like "DRUMMERS"!!,

Basic, but delivered well

Pack Heat Like Summer I'll Rip ya "ORGANS-in-HALF"!!,With the "FORCE-of-a-BLAST"!!,I'm a Tourch Your a Match I'm Ignorin your Ass I'ma Scourcher Your Wack! I'll Have Your Faith Feelin Out of Place like a "MORMON-in-MASS"!!,

Nice punch, Mul.ties tight!!

My Flow is Rated *R* *SON* thats *ALL* In a "DAYS-WORK"!!,Who Set the *R-SON* A 'Blaze` First? I'll Make The *SON*'s Flow look Like an Abortion` Cause ya Elevations "LATE-BIRTH"!!

Wasn't really feeling this line too much, but was delivered nice...Flow was on!





Gettin Ripped? Son i Believe it`s U, "Wave ya Pride" away When The Eagle`s Blew ..
Quick to "Eat Up This Textcee" Make Sure "Sin is Stirred / Sinistered" Like i`m "Cookin Evil Stew" ..

Meh, wasn't feeling it....Pretty big stretch hommie!


Hairstylist Of illest, U`ll Curl Up N Die, U Tha Type to Find Out ya Girl is a Guy, But Still Blow His Cock ..
Ya Unfocus Drops, ya Presense is Not Here, i`m Quick to "Stop Sears / Cears" Like "Foreclosing Shops" ..

LMAO!!! Funny ass bar...but Not hitting tooo hard!


So Heavy Wit This Rap Shit, Mah Mic Might Bend, So Fresh Shit Even Dikes Might Spend ..
They Like Mah Grin, Similar to "Practice Of Baptizing" How Mah "Flows" Quick to "Wipe Out Sin" ..

Multies were off...Choppy ass bar....Nice punch tho

Niggas Know i`ll Bomb They Raps, i Don't Even Gotta Palm Tha Gats, Hogtied in tha Trunk Wit ya Moms in Back ..
This is One For ya Mind, Sin One Of a Kind? Nah "Ear Replaceble/irreplaceble" Like "Beyonce Tracks"

Nice Punch, yah best bar of the battlle!!




Punches: TIE
Nameplay: R sonal
Wordplay SIN
Metaphors TIE - no real Dope ones, alot of mediocore ones tho
Multies: SIN
Flow: SIN
Entertainment: pretty close, but SIN...a couple of yah bars really through of yah verses flow Rson!


no hate, pretty weak from both to tell the truth!


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Who`s ya Vote For?

Cats - R.SON.aLL
Punches - R.SON.aLL
Nameplay - R.SON.aLL
Wordplay - R.SON.aLL
Metaphors - R.SON.aLL
Multies - Sin
Flow - Who the fuck votes on flow for a text battle..?
Entertainment - R.SON.aLL

Vote - R.SON.aLL

Overall.. Not weak..
Not shitty..

So so battle..
Both had some played out concepts and a poor bar..
Like Sin's "Smooth liek butter" line and Rell's "Your girl's a guy" line..
Rell also had some madd forced shit..
Like the Sears/Cears and Ear replacable/Irreplaceable nameplays..

Punches R Son
Nameplay R Son
Wordplay R Son
Metaphors Tie
Multies Sin
Flow Sin
Entertainment R Son

My Vote R Son ..

.. Hmms i Know Fa Sure Those Weren't Forced at all ..
Lol
Do U Know What Forced Means? ..

good battle i enjoyed readin it

Punches -rell (sincear had some kinda basic filler punches)
Nameplay -rell (sin-is-stirred n the ear-replacable lines took it, lol fire)
Wordplay - didnt see any
Metaphors -sin(rells were all nameplays n whatnot, sin had the random mettas)
Multies -sin
Flow -rell (sincears verse was a little choppy n random in spots)
Entertainment -rell

overall vote-rell

good verses by both, sin dropped a tad lighter than usual, rell took this rather easy in my opinion


4-1 rell