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War-Fest - Urban
Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 4:36 am
by War-Fest
..Just recorded this earlier this week..
Let me know what you think..
Any feed is welcome.. Provide criticism..
FileBrella [e07a56_Urban.mp3]
I'mma end up either re-recording the verse or just mix it more on point..
I fell off a couple times..
Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 1:51 pm
by War-Fest
Coo'..
Thanks..
Appreciated if someone moves it..
Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 2:14 pm
by Miilz
Battle Me
Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 3:18 pm
by Miilz
Shit Is Whack. You're From San Diego Known As A Homo City. Nothing in This Track Was Good. The Lyrics Were Made By Peices Of Other Songs. But What Ever Over All id Rate it a 2. Should u KEep On Dropping? NO
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 3:15 am
by Kurse
The beat was so/so...not really anything that I'd rap on, but we all have different tastes.
Lyrics were real basic and simple. Bout as simple as they come on the rhyme scheme table, to be honest.
Concept has been done before.
Sound Quality was fair at most. It wasn't good, but atleast I could understand the words. You either need a better mic or better mixing.
I'd give it a 4/10 for atleast trying and riding the beat for the mostpart You definately need to stay in the booth though if you wanna try to up your presentation game.
Keep doin yo thang kid.
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 6:22 am
by ÐÛÇ£»
MiiLz wrote:Shit Is Whack. You're From San Diego Known As A Homo City. Nothing in This Track Was Good. The Lyrics Were Made By Peices Of Other Songs. But What Ever Over All id Rate it a 2. Should u KEep On Dropping? NO
My dude thats san francisco LoL Sorry millz don't want you looking stupid my dude
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 7:10 am
by Young K
this wasn't that good, but the flow was there, and from there you can work with the rest and elevate, work on your lyricism and topic choices, obviously got that west coast bounce, but this isn't cutting it, work on the hook and what not...
MiiLz wrote:Shit Is Whack. You're From San Diego Known As A Homo City. Nothing in This Track Was Good. The Lyrics Were Made By Peices Of Other Songs. But What Ever Over All id Rate it a 2. Should u KEep On Dropping? NO
dawg if your gonna criticize leave constructive criticism, don't just be a dickhead and mock a mothafucka
Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 10:31 am
by War-Fest
Good looks on the legit feed..
@ Miilz..
How the fuck am I putting lyrics from other tracks together..?
..Wow..
And yeah @ Duc3..
Frisco is the homo city..
Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 3:24 pm
by Lawgix
i can't listen to ur music so i have no opinion of u... cause your file page is under "maintenence"