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My Barz Hard and STARTALLING MOST; STARVIN like MARVAN straight MARVALING TOAST!
Disturb like i'm SPARING WID GHOSTZ! cuz i allwayz 'Spit clean' like GARGALING SOUP
leave ya Deceased from SCARZ IN YA THROAT slice off ya Earz, Quix PARTING YA LOBEZ
and DISCHRGING DA SCOPE say PARDON leave ya in da GARDEN WID POKEZ
Then get to MARCHIN FOR COKE! Flip Gramz, Clip Fam wid da RAG ON DA HANDLE!
Cherry Cloth RED have ya TAGGED N DISMANTLED; n ya can Run nigguh,
but i got THUGZ THAT'LL CATCH-YA they leve ya Leaking BLOOD FROM YA CAP-BRUH!
cUZ I 'scar these clonez' cuz my 'BArz are cold' like PUBZ IN ALASKA
you'd think i was Bugs Bunnys Mom, da way i'm BUYING UP CARROTZ
So stop TRYING YOU SCARED SHIT! Pure Dope, cuz I 'only Sell da SHit' that I'm BUYING WID ARABZ .. NuKKkA



Holla back NikkKKuh!

You Fell Off Bottom Half of your verse in My Opinion
The Firs Half You went Hard Though , Liked The Multi's used
Some Coo Punchlines Decent Wordplay... Multis Did You The best In This Piece Though...

Keep Um Comin ..

THANKS UP!

spit clean like gargling soup?



lol just wanted to point out a weird part

but this piece was okay compared to your other drop.

idk if u got the "spell the word the way you want to" style from haz but idk, its better if u dont do that for ur style...

UMMM.... NO I DIDN'T ^ get that style form him!


lol



but thanks anyway for the feed!

Quix wrote:My Barz Hard and STARTALLING MOST; STARVIN like MARVAN straight MARVALING TOAST!
Disturb like i'm SPARING WID GHOSTZ! cuz i allwayz 'Spit clean' like GARGALING SOUP
leave ya Deceased from SCARZ IN YA THROAT slice off ya Earz, Quix PARTING YA LOBEZ
and DISCHRGING DA SCOPE say PARDON leave ya in da GARDEN WID POKEZ
Then get to MARCHIN FOR COKE! Flip Gramz, Clip Fam wid da RAG ON DA HANDLE!
Cherry Cloth RED have ya TAGGED N DISMANTLED; n ya can Run nigguh,
but i got THUGZ THAT'LL CATCH-YA they leve ya Leaking BLOOD FROM YA CAP-BRUH!
cUZ I 'scar these clonez' cuz my 'BArz are cold' like PUBZ IN ALASKA
you'd think i was Bugs Bunnys Mom, da way i'm BUYING UP CARROTZ
So stop TRYING YOU SCARED SHIT! Pure Dope, cuz I 'only Sell da SHit' that I'm BUYING WID ARABZ .. NuKKkA



Holla back NikkKKuh!

Don't let them fool you, this was completely horrible, nothing worth quoting. You were off in left field on this one. 4/10