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[align=center]Kid im Flames-Rapping u Just a Lame-Faggot ill Get Rid Of cK Sorta Like Gang-Taggings
Why This Lil Fake-Acting? im Rippin-This-Child, Bitch Couldnt Bring "Heat" If He Was Switchin-Accounts
im Sick-Of-ya-Style, Hope This Hater-This-Dying ill Turn This "Ock Ta Gone" Like Paper-Designing
im Greater-And-Rising This Chumps a Thug-No Only Time "K Wanted" Is C's In Blood-Code
im Leavin ya Sonned-Cold But Fuck Ya Flow-Scrub My Verse "Harm Many" Sorta Like Bone-Thugs (Harmony)
Why u On Some Hoe-Stuff? Dont Bother-To-Play-With-Me Or You'll Get ya TOP SHOT Like a Modelin-Agency
i'll Properly-Rape-Ya-Keys Im Da Nicest-Teen My Mom? U Couldnt "Tear Her" ina Frighten-Scene
Stop Biting-Please Kid ya Shooked-On-The-Site u Couldnt Get a "Tie Son" if u Was Looking-For-Mic (Tyson)
Kid im Pushin-The-Fight But Dude Ya Squad-Blows Beat Me? U "Misheard" Like Lesbian Convos
But Bitch Stop-Bro cus ya Writtens-Ass Only "Kal" We Felt Was In Nutrition-Facts[/align]




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Tagging= Spray Painting
He Made Another Account Named "He@t", Drunken Jesus Checked His ip and Told Me.
Bloods Dont Write With C They Replace it With K.
Tear-Her/Terror
Kal Short For "calcium"

All you can do is beef on my keystyle, and the name Kal, you must be a bitch in real life cause u even snitch in a freestyle///

C'mon dawg get wit-da-picture, you cant fuck-wit-deez-scriptures, I'm "flormaldahide" to your "wraps" like a MILL-i-yon "DIPPERS"// You wanted to battle me? I'll let you feel-da-pain, now ya-grillz-insane, from one shot to da mouf I "call it" cause I'm da real "MILLZ-lane"// You dont understand dat I'm da god-of-havoc, you should have declined da challenge, cause I'm givin ya "BLOOD" twice da spread of a thousand "DIAMONDS"!!//I'm da king of "RAPEIN" niggaz da nickname is "CRISCO", lets go!, dis niggaz pussy bandaged up so i rip him a new ASSHOLE!/// Speakin of gettin-RAPED, i got slugs-dat-PENATRATE, an admin's slave dat gets it where he done wit his DINNA PLATE, so before u fuckin rate an emcee like me, make sure you really know whos bitin on Lets Beef!


MILLZ-LANE= mills lane boxing ref.
BLOOD DIAMONDS= diamond trade in africa look it up

not dat creative but its da best i could do to not look like a biter.

Nameplay - Millz
Personal - Millz
Entertainment - Millz
Wordplay - Millz
Punchlines - Millz

millz had some iffy lines but it was a clean sleep, kckal why you dashing off words that aren't multis?

cat sweep to Millz

Kal wasnt bad but just got outclassed on every cat
Millz was more good than fantastic. he has a clever structure that allows him to get 8 punchlines out of 8 lines. problem is some were a bit generic and a couple of the wordplays were forced but on the whole it a good verse

VOTE MILLZ by a bit

Category Swipe To Millz..his lines hit much harder.....kc you could use elevation..you gave attention around irrelevant words by putting apostrophe marks