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I keep it realer than real, I spit iller than Ill.
I aint bankin on fabrications to make a mill.
I'd rather die a Tru ni99a is what I feel, and
Harbor, proper, dollars off of these mics that I kill.
but still, I gotta, I really gotta, push Harder
I spit hotta than saunas but still cant afford prada, and
maybe it's because I was smokin on marijuana, by the,
age of three, given to me, by my momma
or maybe it's because I grew up without a father
too busy poppin, his collar, he wasn't here to stop her
just another sample, of my real life drama, after
all the ishyt Ive seen I barely escaped the Karma,
I said it before no bling and I aint bothered,
I keep it Tru talk to the core a street scholar,
I keep it realer than real, I spit iller than ill
I aint bankin on fabrications to make a mill..

um i didnt like this
im guessing ur just starting out..yes??
work on multis

Well this was a lil weak you need to practice more.

yeah their right you need to practice alot

just a little improvment really
i wasnt feelin that much
it jus was flowed well enough
but practise n keep'em comin

Better than the last one, but you do need practice. Keep em comin, shit'll work itself out.