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Deadline: Tuesday, December 9
No biting, hate votes, dickrides, etc.

Categories are:
Punches
Personals
Multis
Enjoyment
Flow
Complexity
Wordplays
Nameplays

I'm not real picky about categories as long as the vote looks legit...

Khek

I'm the all-tearing...fuck battles! I'm maulin all staring, then I'm jus leavin em for dead! That's whatchu fags call sparing
I'm the cost of all caring, the end...This dyke's dressin in drag an' glaring so, I'm sealing FaNs fate like bad ball bearings

Face it, I blast thru point, fuck a pivot, I'll leave this bastard ruin't an' smash his face to a flat piece like I was turnin cash to coins
I've got some massive loins an' dude's gettin fucked, I keep his ass adjoined. So, If FaN-See Ketchup, it's Only in Fast Food Joints

Look, His home ain't the Illest, he resides in a land o' sorrow! There can only be one of us, an' bet...you'll be damned to follow
This man is hollow...a fraudulent fuck an' sorta like Ghosthunting Archaeologists, I guarentee nobody'll see FaN-Tomorrow

Honestly, I'll lance his heart tho...Truth is, I'm his daddy...I had to grind for his birth...that's a double entendre. I'm blowin the mind o' this jerk
Before a line'll disperse, lemme pity this fool: wack ain't a crime, it's a curse...an' you couldn't get a hand upon Sin if you was a Mime in a Church

Be Serious, I bet you a ugly motherfucker, you couldn't grab a dime in a purse! Partially metaphorical, you're just a hypothetical granny
I'm hittin you typographical whammies...face it, u goofy look fuck, you couldn't get a mouth on your nuts if you was wearin edible panties



edited

Expos:

bar 1 - Ceiling Fans/Sealing Fans - Bad Ball Bearings
bar 2 - Fancy Ketchup/Fan-see Catch Up
bar 3 - Phantom Marrow/Fan Tomorrow - Phantom = Ghost, Marrow = Bone Marrow
bar 4 - self explanatory
bar 5 - " "

Yo...if you wanna better battle, gimme till sometime tomorrow evening to edit this verse and we'll have a bit more competitive battle...up to you tho...I just had alot goin on an' I didn't wanna miss the deadline...

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alright you can edit it... the official dead line is tommorow night

alright you can edit it... the official dead line is tommorow night

[align=center]Stumbling Over Words..This Fag Has Fumbled Lyrics Jumbled up Most Of What You Rap Is Mumbled,
Call His Past Battles An "Over The Top Obligation" How It Seems Duty Had Him Crumbled!
His Ass Whack!, When Spoonz Delivered His Bars Sin Stopped In His Fast Tracks
He's So Damn Fund Of Universals,! His Punches Contain A Little Mis Direction Like Boxers With Cataracks!
My Shots'll Dismantle Ya Wig Son!, Shooter Talk Would Be Krazy Since You Can't Hanlde The Big Guns
Ya Swag Is Definitely Bitch Made? Sin Bad? Nah! We've All Witnessed When Tv Stations Canceled The Sitcoms (Haha)
Aye Boi!,Ya Said You Would Smash Me On Ill-HipHop ..What Happened To You Before?
This Nomadic Prostitute Seems To Be Roaming For Different Spots Since Theres No "Avenue For A Whore"
Let's Get Serious..
When I Up Chuck And Belch Palms On You Bitch!,I'm Abusrd With The Skill!,Don't Trip When I Melt Ya Farm With Two Clips!,
Remember Get'n Murdered On Ill,It's Useless!, Sin Bringing A Watered Down Body,That Explains Wet Trails Left Along The Pool Pit
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Expos - HE lost to me on ihh.. on ihh he had a pic with his tongue on a cat..(many can vouch that) ..he lost to duty..& spoon..
http://www.hiphopave.net/test2/showthread.php?t=37750
http://www.hiphopave.net/test2/showthread.php?t=38583
He's in love with animals has a shit load of them...sin bad was a show that got cancled..yadad yada..And He's fro
m the av.. pool pit = baptism..etcBody = Structure anything else ask me.. cuz if ya don't get..Don't vote

Mods/Admins, we agreed that each of us could edit our verses due to the fact that we were both somewhat pressed for time at the original deadline...both verses have been edited and are ready for voting...

Punches
Personals
Multis
Enjoyment
Flow
Complexity
Wordplays
Nameplays

^^categories


Good Luck FaNs

Punches:fans (came harder)
Personals:fans (had more dirt)
Multis:siniztac (more consistent and difficult)
Enjoyment:siniztac (for the multis and wordplay)
Flow:siniztac (felt like fans had stretched lines)
Complexity:siniztac (better wordchoice and rhymescheme, + higher vocab)
Wordplays:siniztac (easily)
Nameplays:siniztac (had more, although Sin-bad was funnier)

overall: siniztac

btw...marrow is pronounced like Mare-row, like Arrow with an M (just so u know)..it made that bar end shitty

Punches:fans (came harder)
Personals:fans (had more dirt)
Multis:siniztac (more consistent and difficult)
Enjoyment:siniztac (for the multis and wordplay)
Flow:siniztac (felt like fans had stretched lines)
Complexity:siniztac (better wordchoice and rhymescheme, + higher vocab)
Wordplays:siniztac (easily)
Nameplays:siniztac

Don't See How He Got Enjoyment When I Bagged Perso's ANd Punches..Don't see how you gave him the flow cat either but all is good lol L
LoL I guess the cats werent in my favor..

fans...stop swaying...

I Ain't Swaying LoL Just Saying..
I keep mixing up consistency with enjoyment even tho they aint the same
My Bad

upping 0-1

and emoks...i know how SOME pronounce it...but pronunciation of the word depends on the accent and the location...but thanks for the heads up


and yeah, FaNs...I shoulda made consistency a category...regardless, it was a good show

LoL..He Said Emoks

And yeah sin..We should hook up some time (no homo)
And battle another time..

if you win it'll be 1-1 in our trilogy
if i win i'll seal the trilogy with a 2-0 victory LoL...

shit fucks me up...i keep forgetting that it's smoke spelled backwards...anyways...my bad akon...