Hip Hop Forum

innate to states faced in this iffy sticky situation and my
patience is wearing-out-(true) face a barren-mouth-boo
hate or love would actually require dedication
or sense-of-location i just don't care-about-you
i suppose stares-are-now-due super imposed
commuting a glare-thats-found-too abstract to grab-at
thats that minds debate it in attempts thats half-ass
to explain the abnormal i'm really half-formal
the other half-fabricated from all-the storys-exagerrated
fallen comedic glory-stacked-on-playlists, but fuck-it
its nothing, so i'm just a simple structure of assumptions
that most love munchins don't think-can-function
singing-something that won't bring-some-love-in
unless its watered-down to a harmonic-sound
with no substance stuck in just flush with nothing
over a heavy drum-beat so i guess its fuck-me(fuck me)


before i see the gibberish about half it don't rhyme its just not the typical simplistic rhyme scheme it does rhyme

yea it was coo..i can see where it rhymes n all.....i used to write like dat...back in da day..lol way back...but its all goood..peeeace

the rhyme scheme was complex. I liked the whole flow, and concept, it was all complex. 9.3/10

hate or love would actually require dedication
or sense-of-location i just don't care-about-you

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