Hip Hop Forum

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im a decieving heathen demon got my peeps believin
i was seein gleamin reasons to comit some treason
got the season free an feindin so evil plots conceivin
rising past all achievents pleasing even the dark demon
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dastardly duo *boom* a catastophy
i mastered speech
while some suffer from atrophy
why are you after me?
because im stupendous hurendous
and full of tenacity
i'll bust a flow and open skulls
to inspect if i hold gravity
a shadow in battle ill rattle
your brain im pivotal
admit-im-cold when i spit-my-flow
my mission to make listens habitual
even the critics-know
that in this flow its factual
a natural and this style is actual
i gas-n-go to refuel n rap-some-mo'
its contageous
im outrageous cops will hate-this
cant contain it like sin in vegas
takin rapture from the bible chapter
you cant stop it or block it
you the slave and im the master

The Flow was Pretty Much on Point...
Only Thing is In The middle Some things seemed a Little Forced.
Overall This was a Decent Drop, your a GOod Edition To illest Fam
Keep Up The Good Work, & Next Time Try To Put a Lil More Complexity in ya Bars
I Like The Gas N Go refuel N Rap Some Mo.. Part.. Shit Was Coo.

Your Rhymin is Good , u Have a Grasp On Multis
I Mean your Structure is your Structure i'm Not gunna Pick At it,

Just try gettin More Complex, Use More multis if you Can...
Maybe a Few Punches.. Make sure u Have Nice Set Up's Though

Thats All i have to Say.. Keep Droppin Kid

Flow and multies were good. I liked some of the rhyme schemes and internals. Overall, pretty good.

wasnt really feelin this piece
it was good but not really gettin the flow
maybe i'm not on the type of vibe that u got on
i dunno but some nice multies
not much too say worth readin at least
keep'em comin

was iiaght,,,lil simple for me
multis were pretty good 4 most part
flow was dope
ur bars r too short 4 my likes...
no h8

pz