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I Fuckin,
SLAUGHTER IN PILES! GOT HERB, I''m just an AUTHOR IN STYLE
i spit Rough-n Bust Gatz and i''m ''Fucking up Catz'' like i FATHERED DA WILD
I hold CLIPZ DA SIZE OF YA HEAD, screw face, and GIT-A PRIZE TO YA DREADZ
Nigguh, ain''t no DENIEING DA FEDZ! so i''m a leave ya BITCH SURPRISED THAT YA DEAD
My Keyz HIT HARDER THAN YA DISSES, and Please BITCH, MARTYR BEND YA MRS
There ain''t no HARDER THEN THIS CLICK-IZ! so whos feeling M.C? these KIDZ BARTYR WID DA SNITCHES
wit HIT FARTHER OFF THE PITCHES! hangin wid us? YOU-KNOW DA PRICE BRUH!!
cuz we ''Clippin Deadly!'' N ''Spitting Heavy like SUMO-SALIVA
and YOU KNOW WUT I DONE!! So stupid WHOREZ BE DISCREET!
exPLORE A NEW BEEF! Cuz i ''Hold more shellz'' than the SHORE OF A BEACH


Uhh huh!

Expo: was an a Crew Called R.A (Rhyme Addix) on another site


THEREZ,
no punches from GSE like da JAKEZ or DEAD BOXER! and BIZZLE you fuckin FAKE, AN IMPOSTER
when i Kill you, They'll Greet ya in hell, after i 'Treat you to shellz' like DATEZ AT RED-LOBSTER
GSE...I'm aFRAID-ITZ A LOSE SIR; ya pussy don't want it, So if you PLAY-ME?-THEN FIRE IT!
cuz Thiz My 'Swar-a' holding down 'R.A' (ARRRR - EH) like CANADIAN PIRATEZ
ya Puss-clot CUNTZ-WON'T FIGHT BACK! just some PUNKZ WHO LIKE RAP!
just a BUNCH WHO TYPE WHACK! we do it in minutez, you takIn a Fuckin MONTH TO WRITE RAPZ
you fagz out of place here, Like in DaMOIN-WID HEBREWZ, you rapping? Whats da POINT? WE EAT CREWZ
so Don't Feel Special M.C followerz, Cuz i bet 'EVERYONEZ BEEN ASK' to JOIN WID G'S CREW....Hahah Truth!
they making me do it, Oh WHY GOD? SHOCKS these GUYS Don'T BUST!
you 'Kidz is a Waiste' so I'll have mo 'Tipz on ya Face' than an I-POD TOUCH



Quix Beasting dah Boaaardz!

this was pretty dope
nice flow went well with the multies
which then made sum of the punches fire my dude
this shit was dope a great read if i say so myself

wit HIT FARTHER OFF THE PITCHES! hangin wid us? YOU-KNOW DA PRICE BRUH!!
cuz we ''Clippin Deadly!'' N ''Spitting Heavy like SUMO-SALIVA
and YOU KNOW WUT I DONE!! So stupid WHOREZ BE DISCREET!
exPLORE A NEW BEEF! Cuz i ''Hold more shellz'' than the SHORE OF A BEACH


they making me do it, Oh WHY GOD? SHOCKS these GUYS Don'T BUST!
you 'Kidz is a Waiste' so I'll have mo 'Tipz on ya Face' than an I-POD TOUCH

dope shit Quix
keep'em comin

THANKS DOG ^^^ PPRECIATE IT!

no punches from GSE like da JAKEZ or DEAD BOXER! and BIZZLE you fuckin FAKE, AN IMPOSTER
when i Kill you, They'll Greet ya in hell, after i 'Treat you to shellz' like DATEZ AT RED-LOBSTER

n fuck gse lol

LOL ^^ agreed!!



thanks scotty!

that red lobster line was a crucial one.

and rhyme addicts was a crew i was in way back on fiendworld

this was aight... some played shit man... or some shit too simple.. "shells" both of them plays i've seen done quite a few times.. best variation i've seen is.. "bust-in shells like the little mermaid"... and they wernt up to that standard..

saying that.. some ideas where real hot.. ipod touch was hot.. you just need to tighten up consistency of some of these..

the way you write each punchline makes it seem beastworthy lol.. when the punch may actually be tame.. im not a huge fan of the multi system.. but it works on here..

your definately putting out some decent stuff here man.. stay up..