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...and a Genius was born! peep dah Vocab

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:08 am
by Quix
Whos fucksin wid Quix? Nobody!!








Euhhem!






Quix straight
Subtracting your ambitionz like I''m Surgically Removing your BRainz
Mercefully Diluting your Veins wid Rat Poison n have you Purposely Moving-in Pain
have ya family Urgentlly Moving Again; ya crew, had enough of dah Surgeries, Bruises and sprainz
Quix, Relase da fury, and Vicarious Actionz, like some Terrorist Acts When
i''m cherishing gatz and, under some presure, like if Vex was dis Stories Victim
BUT tEkz give me dah Glory Visions, plus i supply ''Blood to Ok(x)''s'' like Respiratory System (look it up)
You cowardz, puss and Refuting dah Tekz Blaze have ya Heart concluding in Chest-Achs
now he SHooting at Vexx-Face? kell a nigguh, and have his life Concluded like Essays
leave you under ground, like wut a REAL Martyr See-Dog!, so GAurd your G''s Spot
and we know Narkz will see copz, but i''ll inject you wid ''Chalestoal'' till your Arteries Clog
Certainlly your Whack herb; and like your rear end, your Physically an-Ass Sir!
have ya First Person, Greeting A Disasterz, cuz your ''Far from an original'' like thingz Digitally Remastered
yous awfull, stop dah Denial Neglection i Infect Childs Wid Lessons and Style, Inject-em!
leave you ''Phoney Fiegnz ScarD'' cuz you ''only seem hard'' like Erectile Decpetion

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:34 am
by The Gonz
Pretty good but some of it seemed forced and some of the lines are too long. Other than that, it was dope.

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:35 am
by Quix
YUP...EACH BAR A LIL LONG...but its because of the content.


Thanks for the feed as allways RUCK!!

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:39 am
by Bonz
i''m cherishing gatz and, under some presure, like if Vex was dis Stories Victim
BUT tEkz give me dah Glory Visions, plus i supply ''Blood to Ok(x)''s'' like Respiratory System (look it up)
^^^^
U murdered that line my dude killer wordplay and punchline. overall ill as drop my dude i think im a like dis site

-=HOLLA FRONT=-

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:47 am
by Quix
thanks dunny ^^

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 7:51 am
by MagicMark
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/lyica ... 11043.html

? dropped this back a while ago lol...

Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:26 am
by - Mutual -
well this was dope
with the vocab
hadda flow with the multies aswell
i thought the lines were aiight
keep'em comin