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4 bars
no biting
due by midnight after check in

CATS are

Punches
Flow
Consistency
Personals
Wordplay
Enjoyment
Vote

check..

what do you mean midnight...its 12.48am sunday, where i am.

MagicMark wrote:check..

what do you mean midnight...its 12.48am sunday, where i am.

my bad didnt know that lol. due in 1 hour starting now.

[align=center]clout this deplorable M&M like i wasnt in the mood for snacks
im 'fracturing skullz ' trenchin ya scalp, until this "magician can only pull his ' brain out his hat '
no trick up my sleeve when i efface his life span
texting aint his greatest fortitude seeing as he couldnt beat me with an extra set of hands
you'll be lost and tortured, name left on the newest city blimp
gash eyes,' till im poppin his attention ' like ' leaking silicon breasted tits '
parching your intellect from head to kneck even the police diggin the hotspots
idiotic vermine, only way you could relish the opposite sex is with pennis botox ( no homo )[/align]

lol..

this dude a bitch like shemales... anything he tries you know he fails
and me manyne? its obvious that im gonna "finish, sincerely yourz" like i was writing an e-mail (its over)

i fuck this bitch till his cunt's off.. ou think your coming hard, but you'll run soft
shit! theres only been one Sincere on illest worth a shit, and he been here for 2 months, dawg!! ($incear)

the way you writing its like you havent got a mind, he aint rappin' in his prime
why do a poll? its obvious you aint "seein' votes" like this was ballot's for the blind!!

imma fuck his proper rules, and spit on him, start tabuck n' poppin' tools!!
look, im gonna put more more holes in Ear, than Punks and rockers do!!!

vote up

Uppin for votes

welcome to illest sincerely yours

imo this was weak battle and i know mark didnt try lol

Punches - mark had stronger delivery
Flow - mark
Consistency - mark, even both had some forced multis here and there.
Personals - mark with the sincear line
Wordplay - mark with the same line ^
Enjoyment - mark's was easier to understand
Vote - mark

1-0 uppin this bitch

cheers arv

1-0

Punches - Mark, hard hits more often
Flow - Mark, really he took this clear
Consistency - Mark just came each line at you
Personals - Mark, more nameplay and personals
Wordplay - I'm tempted to say NONE, ok I said it
Enjoyment - Mark, gotta say he came harder
Vote - Mark

Ok battle, liked a few lines from Mark, 1 from Sin
Think mark just out shinned in this face off boy!
I'm willing and ready to spit so PLEASE growl at me!!

MagicMark GMFV!!

Punches- Magic
Flow- Magic
Consistency- Both
Personals-SY
Wordplay- N/A
Enjoyment- Magic
Vote- Magic

Overall decnt battle, Magic punches were executed better.

Okay... the votes right KUT,.. but how you got there is off... im going to critque your vote... i dont know why you put him as personals..as he didnt have any... show me the personals?..

and wordplay, not available? what where my last two bars then?.. just cause it aint highlighter dotn mean it aint wordplay.. "seein' votes" - ballot for the blind.. this could be thought of as a pun or a metaphor.. but in a way they are both types of wordplay...

so chea...

thanks tho .. 3-0 Magic.. close it..

The M&M line he had and Brain out the hat line were his personals i saw.

personals? i dont see how... their both nameplays.. M&M = MagicMark and Magician = Magic Mark... im neither a magician or an M&M... if i where.. then fair enough.. to me a personal is about someones appeareance, hometown, somethng they've said, something... Personal to them... that isnt really about anyone else.. granted my name is personal... and some grant that school of though to allowed nameplays into personals.. however.. then i must ask.. i had more nameplays than him.. and better imo... so again i dont see where your coming from...

but fair enough..

^^ agreed which is y i hardly ever include nameplays as personals.. cuz they're not..although they can be..not in this case, sure it was more direct but reguardless not a personal...n e ways mark won this hands down

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