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Some Quick Ish.. Reminding Yall Of How I Do...


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I SPARK-THE-GUNS Then MARK-THE-ONES I STARK-FOR-FUN I'm The DARKEST-ONE...
Cuz Scott'll Have Ya "Shakin In Ya Shoes" Like "Marathons For PARKINSONS"!!
BIZARRE-WIT-PUNS, U In My Way So BITCH-WOULD-YA-MOVE Or Ill SPLITCHA-IN-TWO..
Dude I'll Carve Scott~James In Ya Soft~Frame To Show U My SIGNATURE-MOVE!!
ADMIT-IT-IM-COOL! We Know WHOS-THE-KING Who RULES-THE-RING Wit TOOLS-THAT-STING..
So SCREW-WIT-ME? An I'll Put A "Hole In You Pussies" Like The "NUVA-RING"!!
Im Dope Like LUDA-BE!! No Im Not The MELLOW-TYPE Im MuhFuckin HELLA-TIGHT..
Cuz James Be "Runnin Through You Dudes" Quicker Than A "YELLOW-LIGHT"!!
HELLO-SITE!! Im Here To SON-U-POOR-KIDS Lackin Punches Ya PUNS-ARE-BORING..
Imma End Ya Life So Fast You'd Best "Start To Pray" Like "SUNDAY-MORNING"!!
When I PUNCH-ITS-GORY!! U Aint THREATNING-NOR-AN-OBSTACLE Eatcha NECK-LIKE-ITS-A-POPSICLE..
Cuz Yall Will Never "Beat Me Over The Net" Thats Literally "TECHNICALLY-IMPOSSIBLE"!!
Im WRECKLESS!-SEE,-IM-HOT-AS-COAL.. Disagree? Jus TRY-AN-TEST-IT Ill FRY-YA-BEST-SPIT..
Ill Run U Down N Leave Ya Body On The "Side Of The Road" Like A "HIGHWAY-EXIT"!!
Rip U GUYS-IN-SECONDS!! Cuz I CHOP-UP-YA-TEXT When Im OFF-MASHIN-SETS..
Bitch My Fists'll Putcha "Six Feet In The Ground" Like "DOGS-HAVIN-SEX"!!!<<(think about it) !!!!


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When I PUNCH-ITS-GORY!! U Aint THREATNING-NOR-AN-OBSTACLE Eatcha NECK-LIKE-ITS-A-POPSICLE..
Cuz Yall Will Never "Beat Me Over The Net" Thats Literally "TECHNICALLY-IMPOSSIBLE"!!

Lmao.. this line was Dope...

Rip U GUYS-IN-SECONDS!! Cuz I CHOP-UP-YA-TEXT When Im OFF-MASHIN-SETS..
Bitch My Fists'll Putcha "Six Feet In The Ground" Like "DOGS-HAVIN-SEX"!!!

I Also liked this line To


Them were the best bars IMO
Ofcourse the multi's were on point from you (As usual)
Flow was long but got decently balanced, because of your multis
most of the other bars were okay.. i think you coulda came harder... either way Decent drop.. keep at it

6 feet in the ground was dope.. although it should be "six feet ON the ground".. so kinda takes away still a dope concept..

the rest was so so for me, the line duce quoted, technically impossible wasn't great..

first two lines where okay but i've seen both concepts used by one writer and his where constructed in much the same way..

side of the road and start to pray where real simple...

this was just okay... this aint my style of writing tbh.. so its hard for me to get on it..

keep doing..

this was ok. definitly not your best but still decent

Rip U GUYS-IN-SECONDS!! Cuz I CHOP-UP-YA-TEXT When Im OFF-MASHIN-SETS..
Bitch My Fists'll Putcha "Six Feet In The Ground" Like "DOGS-HAVIN-SEX"
^^^^
lmao that was dope