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Authentic

Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 12:53 pm
by eMCee Havic
my rhymes are authentic, my mind has invented
im viol and demented im the worse kind of cynic
my style can be mimicked outside of the limit
you gone need a clinic my words will mash and stomp
ill mash the comp like a full on attack with bombs
you cats are pawns I'm snakes in the long grass
you should see me in combat when first making contact
I break laws b do wrong acts as the on slots commence
If you rise to your defense the burnin craters immense
You'll lose all you sense and im the one to blame
Artillery reaches long range making the scenery change
Flows ll' render you insane my words are murderous
N written in permanent then verbally serving it
Then lyrically turning spits to bullets laced in thorns
As the killer is born I am the eye of the storm
Around me structures reform a sniper so biters beware
Most emcees cannot compare complaining that it isn't fair
They brittle so handle with care my strength is freestyle
I spit a flow walkin 3 miles im rugged so beefs wild
Women give me smiles cause of my non lack of confidence
Street wise with common sense swift my spits are prominent
Could you pass the condiments emcees are weak 2 speak
But in free I be the beast I chief the weed n breathe
What you haters C in me is something that cant be achieve
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apreciate some feed

Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 2:08 pm
by 1 !LL B!tch
The rhyme scheme was nice, maily what kept me readin`
Some puns, but it had nice flow too, overall pretty nice drop.

Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 4:13 am
by eMCee Havic
uppin

-- Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:15 am --

uppin