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The Color Green vol. 1
Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 4:52 am
by The Gonz
Pieces of paper with little green faces on it/
Can be the difference between who's fake and honest/
Its way beyond this status and class structure/
It affects everyone from the the suits to the crack hustler/
From the lack luster to the most vibrant of types/
Thinking the quality is better if its higher in price/
Buying their lives, trying to impress us with gimics/
Obsessed with their image instead of the perfection within us/
So materialistic they become objects themselves/
Viewing life as a product to sell for profit and wealth/
Logic and health are victims of this new disease/
Consumed with greed, eyes change colors from blue to green/
Its true Ive seen the rich living check to check/
In the fast lane, greed and envy stay neck and neck/
Life is left on the back burner for purses and cars/
Its sad when they hate what you have, not the person you are/
Been a while so I thought I'd throw somethin up.
Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 12:36 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
this was pretty dope, i mean its not complex or nothin, but definitely somethin i can agree on, i was wrote a piece like this a few months back mentioning the industry with business in suits, n e ways.. overall it was nice, one of the better drops i've actually read.. didn't go off topic like most drops on here, uppin for vol. 2
Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 9:56 pm
by Arvincible
dope as fuck
i love the topics u bring man theyre really solid and straightforward
you had a great flow and rhymescheme man i wanna read vol 2...
keep it up ruck
Re: The Color Green vol. 1
Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 12:35 am
by The Gonz
Uppin to pair with vol 2 since this got slept on
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Re: The Color Green vol. 1
Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:08 am
by FlipSide
Buying their lives, trying to impress us with gimics/
Obsessed with their image instead of the perfection within us/
So materialistic they become objects themselves/
Viewing life as a product to sell for profit and wealth/
That Shit is real Dunn...
Re: The Color Green vol. 1
Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:49 am
by QwarterZ
Buying their lives, trying to impress us with gimics/
Obsessed with their image instead of the perfection within us/
I like how that flowed together this was a dope piece!
very nice topic aswell, keep writing! I think I'ma have to peep the 2nd piece!
Re: The Color Green vol. 1
Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 8:12 am
by f/spook
good flow. pretty sick
Re: The Color Green vol. 1
Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 6:06 am
by complexity
Ruckus wrote:Pieces of paper with little green faces on it/
Can be the difference between who's fake and honest/
lol @ that line, good one
Its way beyond this status and class structure/
It affects everyone from the the suits to the crack hustler/
True...
From the lack luster to the most vibrant of types/
Thinking the quality is better if its higher in price/
Well, that's a fact, isn't it?
Buying their lives, trying to impress us with gimics/
Obsessed with their image instead of the perfection within us/
Great line, the highlight bar of this short piece.
So materialistic they become objects themselves/
Viewing life as a product to sell for profit and wealth/
Great one.
Logic and health are victims of this new disease/
Consumed with greed, eyes change colors from blue to green/
Killer.
Its true Ive seen the rich living check to check/
In the fast lane, greed and envy stay neck and neck/
Alright.
Life is left on the back burner for purses and cars/
Its sad when they hate what you have, not the person you are/
Probably, the second best bar of this drop.
Been a while so I thought I'd throw somethin up.
Simple and to the point. All truths, all reality. I can't fault this at all.