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My Book of Rhymes (multis)

Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 5:29 pm
by eMCee Havic
written off "Book of rhymes- by Nas"

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i reach into my book-of-rhymes with a crooked-mind
like most criminals i'm bound to get booked-in-time
my rooks-aligned, for tha chess-game-desired
im left-strained-n-tired butmy best-game-is-fire
as the fresh-pain-inspires, a new chance-2-write
emcees romance-the-bite but cant stand-2-fight
lyrics never randomized im str8 rugged-n-raw
i trouble-tha-law, with my puddled-resolve
like its, nothing-at-all BOOM puzzle-is-solved
you cant muzzle-the-dawg, with out losing-it-all
i bruise-an-i-maul while yall puppies cruise-in-crawl
your movements-r-stalled, as i move-in-high-speed
you cant do-it-like-me spitting fleunt-tight-frees
cause musics-my-speach and i agree that there ll never-be-peace
cause clevers-tha-beast who takes pleasure-in-feast
the treasure-he-eats, be the rhythm measured-in-beats
the pressure-ll-release upon......strong-agression
an honest-contestant dropping bombs-on-sessions
a common-lesson, never judge unless you wanna-be-judged
lies ll never do the the justice that honesty-does
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upping for some feed

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 4:58 am
by ScottJames
multis were def on point, good job.

too short though!!!!

Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 1:06 pm
by eMCee Havic
uppin

Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 2:11 pm
by Phasewon
this shit was on point, good multies, nice flow, a couple forced rhymes, but overall a solid lil' verse, dope drop.