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first time i ever done a hook, viral added the radio effect on that

my first "official" solo, course its not goin on an album or nothin but yea..


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Real talk son real talk haha like dat sound effect Viral put on da hook, his mixin was sick as always props 2 Viral, Koms... finally a solo and how in da fuck is dis not goin on ur album u need 2 slide dis shit on there homie shit is dope dawg. U got off on dis no lie bro been waitin 4 ur solo 4 a min. U gettin better on da mic which is a plus beat was sick as hell u and I like them same type of eerie beats with krazy instruments on em, dat orchestra type beats. Good drop dawg I hope u writin over there dawg so when u come back u could lay down sum tracks.

Matter a fact when is u comin back here dawg lol

i forgot how tight this track was...lol i remember puttin that effect on there..i baerly even mixed it tho^^^...lol...E did his own mixin on it..and recorded it by himself..and i just tweaked it out a very lil n added da effect..haha..but da multis were everywhere on that one..it was dope...

dont know for sure, but definitely sometime this year

aww shit good shit Koms nice dawg nice

Deff Your Best Audio.
Your Sorta Gettin The Hang Of Shit In Ways..
You Gotta Sorta Find Ya Voice , Get Your Emotion Up.. And Just Go Alot Harda
But As Long As You Keep Goin You Should be Aiight..
Certain Places You Fell Off , I Liked The Begginin Of ya Second Verse The Best.

Anyways Take The Feed Or Leave It.

this is chill... nice stuff...

beat is solid.. piano is cool..

flow seemed on point for the most.. hook sounds a little off.. the raspiness i would take out... the lyrics are cool.. but that effect makes it sound off...

lyrics are pretty good for an audio.. specially the multis.. pretty cool

as haz said could always work on presence and delivery.. but its not bad at all..

good stuff..

The vocals need to come up on the verses about another 2.0 dbs
and on the hook about another 1.30

lyrically this shit was sooo sick...quite a few things that I've love to quote, but I'll come back and do that. Definately gettin the craft down...I'm really proud of you young blood!

lol ^^ appreciate the feed, and yea.. this was off in places, my presence is gettin there..baby steps haha im too chill for emotions but i'll get stupid on a track while im down in florida..just gotta get my equipment(shouldn't take too long for that) uppin

i liked this track homie... man ur growin so fast on the mic its ridiculous. ur almost on some proof type rhymin its tight.. keep doin ur thing homie

great multis, flow was sick, lyrics ill as always you're a talented writer young gun. Congrats on ya first hook, it sounds RAW. no need to shine comin holy devine. only remind you to slowly unwind. dope. lol viral shot out for the mixin i liked that effect on the hook made it stick out. ill track boy. Get Back to tha Chi so we can record some more shit like this dawg. by bad for takin 28 days to drop feed but like viral better late than never. lol

its sick. if only you could relax with the double-ups (its getting boring, which beats the purpose)