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i stepped back from the mic like u said i think it's easily understood although i still have put up the lyrics for the people who jus still cant get it
this is pieces from various drops i thought were my best put'em together

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Lyrics:

Hook
I'm A Track Wrecka
I Be Back betcha
Jus Wait No Payback Until i Getcha
Track Wrecka

Only The Brave And Fool Hearted Should Attempt-To-Start-Beef
so i'm exempt-from-part-heat bring full fire like an exempt-arson-theif
mafucka i be clingin to pointless wars like it was lord-of-the-rings
sellin shit whorin-these-things my words of metal jus scorin-these-strings
like a guitar-for-instance i aint up to par-for-innocence
i filled-n-betraying chilled-with-abrasions of these concielin-makin watch hate-that-i-bring
skill-wit-invasion of aliens thrilled-with-amazement ya lyrics i desercrate-when-i-sing
still-with-no-changin i spill-lacerations to kill-masturbation uphill-renovating
difficult yet a lil-with-much-hatin my ethnicity is white fuck it u right i'm a wigga tonight
my ethnicity is white so dont impede on my potentcy-words
frozen-n-slurred the proximity in the vacintity is gold-n-yet-blurred
i'm holdin-my-first lacerations to abrogate radical holes-in-the-earth
too good i may have stolen-this-verse but it's mine i'm ownin-my-hearse
to my death too skeptical to alleviate ignorant mafuckas DNA
Do Not Abreviate or Dyslexic Nations Associate i hit low-n-late
at a faster goin-rate than Usain after the world record show-is-take
i throw-mistakes out the window white paper like snow-my-face
u cant go-my-pace i throw the fro-to-waste my energy a pro-mistake
i'm blowin-up showin-up is a huge boosts popularity rotund anyday
i'm gone keep bringin these quality bars u can call me NESTLE
i'm amazing-with-elegance so full of patience-n-relevance
i'm dark evil ageless-n-intelligence u lack greatness-an-eloquence
trapped by my maze-of-embelishment leave u in graves-i'm-so-decodant
what u say-is-irrelevant beat u with words of rock i'm fatal-with-elements
how do u take-your-defeat u hate-to-get-beat i'm desercratin-all-ya-spirits
hittin-mates-quit ure spittin-straight-shit the way i'm defocatin-on-ya-lyrics
i'm waitin fo my moment-of-rest-mine u roamin-with-breath-crimes ya lyrics got us groanin-fo-death-lines
my skills elevatin i'm honin-the-test-shrines of owning-my-stressed-mind cant help cloanin-my-best-rhymes
i'm come prepared-with-swords amazed i know you all-stare-of-course ya lyrics like a fable-of-truth
back up u get a-rare-applause excited ya-scared-of-sorts loser i gave u a nametag like i label-the-proof
i'll leave u graspin-my-hair like a celeb but i'll be the last-one-u-scare so hang-on-this-note
cus you'll be maskin-ya-lair my rhymes leave u gaspin-fo-air when i first bang-on-ya-throat

sick fuckin lyrics... multies were off the chain... audio wise... it was cool... fell off a few times but thats because ya lyrics drug on... try shortening up the lyrics next time... something thats gonna be on point and short n sweet... but still have that ill element that u brought in this track... good shit

give it a 5.5/10 man

keep it up homie

thanks Law much preciated

no prob dude

how did ya think the sound was could u understand it without the lyrics i mean

yo. i agree with lawgix. lyrics are pretty dope imo. just there are drag-ons here and there nothing you couldnt fix. pretty dope beat i just felt you should have came harder on it. its hard to listen to it when some sounds like whispering and some sounds sound like screaming. stay in one place on the mic dont get too far or too close and stay steady with your pitch unless its part of your delivery. if you need help mixing some shit down im sure if you ask somebody they'll do it for you. that should help solve some of your recording issues
5/10
keep up man remember theres always room to elevate.
stay up!

thanks fo the feed K.O any thing u want feed on jus tell me

bumpin

only thing wrong is quality and your delivery, but that's what fucks it all up, your lyrics are fucking sick, flow is pretty good, you have alot of potential all you have to do is fix the quality and up your delivery...

yeah i got a better mic couple days ago which is better quality than this so i'll be doin it again at sum point

ayy mutual i will say this the best one so far..
hahaha i hear what your attemptin to do with the hook
if your gonna do that style ya just gonna have to keep
practicin is all..elevatin alot though..

the hook rode the beat well..it could be good if ya cleaned it up..

sounds like ya droppin it in one take..the verse..
uhh i see the scheme and if you delivered it right..
shyt would be firin..you gotta put emphasis on the multi's by hittin
giving a slight pause after 'em or before em..anyway
gettin better dude.

Huh...Sounds Like Some Kind Of Robot computer. Dope Lyrics...The Water Mark On The Beat Was The Dopest Thing