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Talk Shit On My Writtens? Pussy..I'll Spark Clips On You Kittens..You Need To Urgently Learn
Ya Words'll Be Burned,So After Tha Blows..You'll Need Ice To Reduce Swellin On A "Fucked Up Tone" ... Like Third Degree Burns!
I Got Guns And I Drop Bombs...Y'all Wondering Can This Fag Boi Handle..Cuz I Pack Poised Ammo...
Embarrass You And Your Peers...I'll Give Anyone With Talent A Bad Name..You Could Call It A Tabloid Scandle!
And Even If You Do Respond...You Wouldn't Supply It Sufficiently..Bitch! I Never Comply To Your Sympathy..
Go Whine To The Church... I Doubt The Chap'll Help...Seriously Dawg You Might Suffer From Iron Deficiency (DAMN!)
Smash Ya Face With Tires And Silly String (Wtf?)..In My Lawgix Thread....Whats With The Frontin? YOU AINT HARD
I Promise Dudes They Soft...The Machette'.. Will Leave Two Tones Layed Out In Strips...As If I Wanted A Paint Job!
You Accustomed To Stay Fraud... I Beat Niggas Ass For Fun I Swear...I'm Just Brawling And Laughin'.
He'll Be Dodging & Gaspin, The Way This Is Proceeding..There Will Be No More Left Of Talent..You Should Call Him A Has Been
Let Me State In This Case That This Hoes Shook...I'll Smash His Face In With Both Hooks...
Talking Down On My Rhymes..Nigga Please..You Couldn't Push Out Writtens If You Gave Birth To A Note Book..[/align]

Man, I'm sorry but I can't even read this shit. Shorten your lines. Whatever punches you have hiding in there aren't doing anything when you add all that damn filler. You're punches aren't complex enough to need 800 words to line em up. Seriously, yer flow is like majorly dicked. There's no way you could drop this to a beat.

i agree this was shit

TheRuckus wrote:Man, I'm sorry but I can't even read this shit. Shorten your lines. Whatever punches you have hiding in there aren't doing anything when you add all that damn filler. You're punches aren't complex enough to need 800 words to line em up. Seriously, yer flow is like majorly dicked. There's no way you could drop this to a beat.

You're Just A Hater...
And Have You Heard Of Rapping Fast?
Well Yeah I Can Do That..You Ass..

It also depends on how fast you can read...dip shit..that says a lot about you're illiteracy

honestly ruckus has a point duce. who you callin an ass with sloppy writtens like that. have you heard of run on sentences? its so piled up, your punches are easily buried in there. chop your shit up and [break] it [down].

...wat's rapping fast have to do wat u wrote lol, this isn't audio.. u can't just write to a beat and expect the viewers to know that its fast paced, other than watever pace u were goin at..its choppy..ur gettin rustier by the minute


and wat's the point of boastin urself like all these cocky rookies that tend to have a habit of doing so, (damn...damn wat?) lol try to avoid that..if the audience thinks its "damn" then they'll let u know

I'll Give Anyone With Talent A Bad Name..You Could Call It A Tabloid Scandle!


TOUGH! ..


Will Leave Two Tones Layed Out In Strips...As If I Wanted A Paint Job!

Lmfao ..
Could Of Worded It Better .. I Liked How U Brought The Concept 2 The Table


There Will Be No More Left Of Talent..You Should Call Him A Has Been

That Shit Was Tough ..


You Couldn't Push Out Writtens If You Gave Birth To A Note Book..

Closer Was Weak Compared To Everything ..

Those Lines I Pointed Out Went Hard ..


Whys Everyone Jumpin On This Mans Dick Though?

I Mean Ruckus Gave Um Constructive Critism .. K.O. Can't Come Up With a Hard Punchline If His Life Depended On It ..
N Ekoms Is Just a Groupie .. N Duce Would Murda U In The BAttle Grounds ..
U 2 K.O. .. Go Jump In The Text Battle Grounds ..


Anyways Keep It Goin DUce ..

lol im a groupie? cuz his shit is weak? and ur a faggot cuz u nurse his wounds every time he falls.. if u don't let him pick himself back up ur just gonna bury him..duce can do watever he wants to do in the battle grounds.. im not saying HE SUCKS im saying wat he's been droppin lately has... don't get ur shit twisted fagizard, n e ways.. i already ko'd duce with a quick key..think before u talk dumbass, no one's on his dick except u..

LOL!.. Ok Clown Yet ... U Keep Hatin On Every Lil Thing The Guy Says ..
You K.O.d Him? Lmfao ... I Wanna See Yall Battle Again... you Will Get Ridden On... And U Havent Even Dropd Ina Minute With ya Rusty Ass 3 Multi Style... Played Punch Or Forced Wordplay... So Fuck Outta Here Nancy...you'd Get Shitted On

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TheRuckus wrote: Save your half assed insults and playground derived put-downs for you verses, you'll need all the punches you can muster. Bravo on your display of maturity as well. Trying to insult someone's intelligence because they said something that rubbed you the wrong way. Very adult behavior. It's okay, I'll just send a quick PM to Complexity and have him adjust the margins on the pages to fit your oversized lines. No harm, no foul. Suck it up and drive on. You act like I'm the first person to give you negative feedback. Ruckus is not a scapegoat for Illest Lyrics' self absorbed emcees who have been forcefed sugar-coated critiques on silver platters. I call it how I see it.

And Haz, seriously, we're cool and all, but you need to learn to just shut up. For real.

the truth has spoken.

And Haz, seriously, we're cool and all, but you need to learn to just shut up. For real.


.. Nah Not WHen Niggas Dick Ride Dood's Who WOuld Smash Them ..
I Aint Just Gunna Go With The Crowd Like K.O. Or Ekoms ... Sorry ..

This need to be re-written so that someone can read it without getting a migraine. I tried reading it fast because apparently that was going to help -- it didn't. You can do better.

Double.FL wrote:This need to be re-written so that someone can read it without getting a migraine. I tried reading it fast because apparently that was going to help -- it didn't. You can do better.

read it fast. no wait. read it slow. no wait. read it with your eyes close i heard that helps.

fuck you haz go ride some homo bandwagon you're always on and make sure you have the first copy of buddens padded room. because thats all you fucking talk about you faggot.

fuck you haz go ride some homo bandwagon you're always on and make sure you have the first copy of buddens padded room. because thats all you fucking talk about you faggot.


And .. All U Talk About is ' Knucklebabies Or Calm Your Beard' Homo Ass Termanology.. I'm Not Goin Back N Forth With Your Pathetic Ass.. We'll Have a A Rematch.. N I Want A Battle In Da Text Grounds ..