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Feedback someone?
Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 3:44 am
by RAJE
Don't think i've ever posted an audio on here before
recorded this last week, would appreciate some feed
Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 3:25 pm
by TreTru
the beat was kinda crazy..at first on that one
synth ..but it's just loud or somthin...once
da beat kicks in fully it's aight..
the hook..was kinda off IMO..umm..i think theres a bakup
that's off or sumthin..the scheme and rythm is actually cool
though..
the verse...was good lyrically..decent..good scheme and rythm..
just a lil soft on the deliv and volume..in areas..sounds
like you know what ya doin with the flow though...
decent drop..short though...hahaha...anyway..keep droppin homey.
Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:03 pm
by RAJE
will add that the beat was by hassan ansari/abnotic records
i'm only responsible for the verse, but thanks for feed man,
uppin?
Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:22 am
by Lawgix
ummmm this was okay... i think the beat was a lil loud on it... couldn't really hear the lyrics that well... but it was okay... couldn't really tell if u fell off or not... it was cool tho i won't rate it cause i didn't hear it that well... but i'll listen to it again n let ya know
Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 6:15 am
by RAJE
thanks bro.
long time since i've heard from you!
Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 7:01 am
by Lawgix
yeah no doubt...
Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 8:24 am
by RAJE
so yo anyone else?
Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:25 am
by TreTru
looks like you been a member for a minute...that's cool..
you might wanna leave feed on other peoples songs too..if you really want more feed for your drop..fyi..peace
Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:04 am
by Dead Silence
loved this beat
did a ight job with the flow
dont think alot of ppl would attempt this kinda thing
lyrics were iffy
u had some good ones
and some bad ones
try working with your lyrics a little bit.
and ur rhyme scheme.
i dk i just dont like it
but i liked how u "talked" to a female.
5/10
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