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Satans Witness
Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 4:39 pm
by Skywalker
I crush christian hearts like an athiest-priest speaking of the apocalypse and the craziest-beast.Workin dead souls every day of his life still remembers the day he took jesus-christs. Trapped in hell burnin the cross since 3-B.C but in 2006 his soul still fufills-me. i picture this so much diffrently now i pass by a church and imagine it burning down. Why he chose me why am i seeing-this, all i know is im the first satans-witness.
Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 4:55 pm
by drunken jesus
whats the point of the dashes?!? except the first two lines the shit you put dashes in didn't rhyme with anything else
Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 9:38 pm
by complexity
Satan is here!! This was a little disturbing. I'll give it a 4/10. Keep it up.
Posted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 12:11 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
eh... could've been alot better 2/10
Posted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 11:13 pm
by precise
i wont rate this, but ill give ya some feedback:
diggin the style, pickin entertertaining shit to write about, youre basically lacking in rhymescheme, it started out pretty coo with the "I crush christian hearts like an athiest-priest speaking of the apocalypse and the craziest-beast"
just keep elevatin man
Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 10:04 am
by Subsist
Hey it all rhymed with me , was short though.